The Ultimate Power of Earth [Chapter 28][Last Chapter]

[nekonotango]

Everyone was coughing because of the thick smoke and dust from the collapsed building.

“Yamada, what if Yabu really…” Mirai asked Ryosuke who was standing beside her. She stopped when she saw Ryosuke was busy caring about other who was badly affected because of the thick dust.

Ryosuke turned to Mirai when he heard she was calling his name.

Comments

[akinoyama]

Waaah….. Finally the story reached the end… Congratz to you

[akinoyama]

Sorry for making loooonggggg comment again... Because it's the last... so I want to put all of my thought... But actually there's still i want to write... But I don't want to make others sick read my comment. Maybe I'll just post in my journal.

[nekonotango]

XDD
it's okay...
I don't mind...and I think other won't mind too
XDD
just wrote your thought as much as you want...in your journal??? okay!! I'll read it...
anyway, reborn as popular idols is not impossible if this story take place 1000 years ago...XDDD

[ryoma_nakamada]

reading...

will reply later XD

[nekonotango]

okay!!
will wait for your real reply...^^

[ryoma_nakamada]

why did you end it so soon?? why???

:((

[nekonotango]

I thought you'll be happy..T_T
I just to finish it fast so that I can continue on my other fanfic...
gomen..

[mabz17]

great!!
it's ended!! XD
GOOOD JOB on this one!

LOVE the part when mirai was covered by the shield thinggy, and also when yuto was about to kiss yamada! HAHA!

&&

GOOD LUCK to your upcoming fics!

GANBARE~!♥

[nekonotango]

Thanks...^^

XDD...the idea actually suddenly come while I was writing...

thanks...

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[pymhsj4649]

Oh, my God ! sorry, I'm brazilian and it was so difficult to read this.. but i got it!! :D so... many thanks for you for this fanfic, I just LOVED it !! *--*

but I didn't understand one thing.. what was the sacrifice ?!?!? 00' the life of 1000 years of hikaru and kota?!?

well..I would like this to a film nee, can you imagine ?!?! a film of the Hey ! Say ! JUMP members.. soo cooool .. :}

nee, sorry for did'nt comment here before, but I criated a journal today, T__T

again, CONGRTULATIONS for this fantastic fanfic, I will read others, I promise ! :)

nee, the last thing, can you tell me some good fanfics?! or, some fanfics that has members of japanese boy bands, pleasee??

thank you for all, :} I will wait for your answer !

P.s. sorry if I did any mistake, I don't know how to write english very well, xD

kisses, (:

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[nekonotango]

0.o~~ Really? XDD Nice to meet you...Sorry if it's hard for you but I glad that you could read it...Hahaho ...Thanks...

Well, Hikaru and Yabu have to live as ghosts in 1000 years..^^

Yeah!! I know... I hope so but that's sound so impossible...T__T All HSJ's members in onne movie sound really exciting..

It's okay...^^ I'm glad that you comment now..

XDD thanks..

You can find a lot here...http://community.livejournal.com/heysay_fanfic/

It's okay... As long as I understand, that's never be a problem..

kisses back~