[one shot] hungry for you

[nekowrites]

Title: hungry for you
Pairing: Jr./Youngjae
Rating: NC-17
Length: ~5.9k
Summary: Shy, virginal Youngjae meets Jinyoung in a club, and they form a connection. After weeks of chaste touches, he worries that Jinyoung doesn't want to get physical with him, but that couldn't be further from the truth.
Warning:[spoilers]Character death, brief references to

Comments

[nekokonneko]

is that a good omg or a bad omg?

[blaqshinki]

I'm too shocked and incoherent at the moment to even know what to comment... I'm... So...

I was like.. Ok lets not see the warnings, lets just read... How naïve I was... 2young is so perfectly fitted for stories about ~disorders~ and I was like "ok it may go down on a prank that has youngjae fucked up" BUT NO THIS IS A WHOLE NEW LEVEL OF FUCKES UP. When i call Jinyoung the devil it iSNT SERIOUSLY i'm-----

This was so good but yet so sad... I was so happy for youngjae... Cries a fucking river

[nekokonneko]

I knooow, I was so sad for Youngjae when I had to kill him off, I half considered changing the ending.

[bookishvice]

OHMYGOODNESS
I was prepared, but at the same time I WASN'T. My heart breaks for Youngjae :((

[nekokonneko]

The ending was the first thing that I had thought of, but I still felt so bad for poor Youngjae when I actually had to write it.