Cat's in the Cradle

[nelstar7]

Title: Cat's in the Cradle
Author: NelStar7
Rating: G me thinks
Disclaimer: If I owned them, Chlollie would be running the joint, but alas they are not mine and Clois gets most of the screen time... I also don't own the song, which is by Harry Chapin.  Mistakes are all mine, I kinda didn't do the greatest editing job because if I agonized over this

Comments

[nelstar7]

Lol! I blame a lot of things on Kayla so you're in good company here!

Thanks for the review and sweet words! I hope to write more Chlollie in the future!

[modscho]

There's absolutely no reason to be nervous ... this was beautiful and I'm sure that Ollie will be an amazing father!

I couldn't help getting all teary-eyed though, but it's been happy tears at least at the end. In between I was afraid that they would die without ever seeing their grandson again. But thanks to Harry Chapin Ollie woke up before it's too late!

[nelstar7]

Awwwww! I love hearing that I made someone cry!

...wait that sounds wrong... ;)

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

[awesomegeek]

That was awesome and what a great song choice.
I loved that it was all a dream , you had me going there for a bit and the ending was so sweet with Oliver and Connor.

[nelstar7]

It's a great song isn't it? It always reminds my brother and I of our dad which doesn't make any sense because our dad was there for everything, he never missed a single event...

Anywho! Thanks for reviewing! Glad you liked it!

[theoracle85]

Aww that was great!! I loved the ending especially. So sweet.

[nelstar7]

Thanks for reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[nienna87]

For your first Chlollie...it was awesome! So cute and I loved Connor throughout the story. Definitely suprised to see it was all a dream when Oliver woke up :) Great job! I loved it!

[nelstar7]

Thank you! You have no idea how nervous I was about posting this! Thanks for reviewing!