What They See series - What Rhys Sees, for jo02

[nemo_baker]

Title: What Rhys Sees
Summary: the prompt from jo02: I have a fondness for fic where Jack and Ianto are being observed - by accident - by one of the other characters (hopefully Gwen) and learns something positive and new about their relationship. Something nice but not mushy or sentimental

Comments

[badly_knitted]

A much better dance sene than the one on screen. I love that Ianto and Jack danced on through several songs =)

[nemo_baker]

Yeah, that scene really bugged me so... I had to fix it haha
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it =D

[jo02]

I agree with badly-knitted, this was much nicer than what we were led to believe Ianto and Jack were thinking - separately - through that scene, and I'm glad it made Rhys happy looking at them dancing. Thank you :)

[nemo_baker]

Thank you very much!! Yeah, for me it was pretty hard to accept the canon version, so I'm glad you think I've improved upon it!

[dylantoms]

I love this! It's great to read how that dance progressed.
Really, some of these TV directors need shooting!

[nemo_baker]

Thank you!!
Haha I... very much agree