Princess of Deception (1/2)

Feb 10, 2008 19:39

Title: Princess of Deception
Chapters: 1/2
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princess of deception, alice nine, antic cafe, jrock

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elfling_eryn February 10 2008, 19:17:54 UTC
*giggles*
Oh my
Poor Tora-kun
*pets*

I really like this one and this phrase killed me:
The little man was such a perfect depiction of femininity, even Mana looked jealous.

*rofl**burst out laughing*
*giggles*

*gives loads of cookies to you*
Good job!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter

(and shame on you for making me blush again because of all this praise
*Bright red*)

EDIT: Yay! First comment!

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 19:32:57 UTC
Oh, you'll feel worse for Tora later xDD

Haha, thanks xD Im glad you thought that was funny x3 I feel bad for making Saga into the laughing stock of the party though xDD

*shares cookies with you*
Thank you kindly, I just hope I won't screw up the next part, Im nearly done with it though xDD

Bahaha! Yes, shame on me, whatcha gonna do? >D *evil laughter*

And congratulations xD kyahah!

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elfling_eryn February 10 2008, 19:40:37 UTC
*grins*
*curious now*
why that?
*cocks head*

*giggles*
He'll understand. And he can take revenge on Shou later on
*grin*
*can already see the little princess fucking Shou in a closet or just out on the terrace*
*snickers*
Or he could force Shou to wear the dress in privat more often

*smiles*
*nibbles on cookie*
I'm looking forward to it~

I...I...I...*sniffs*
Iris-sama~
*cries*

*giggles*

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 19:46:07 UTC
you'll see,you'll see x3
well it won't turn out THAT horrible for him 8D;

Yes, and Im sure Saga is going to take revenge xD
*dies laughing* Maybe I should write a spin off on what happened to Saga and Shou after they went off? XDD

Im glad you are~ <33

Buhu, Im so mean, especially for praising you so much *bows deeply in respect* XDD

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kristykama February 10 2008, 21:24:54 UTC
firstly; yes Nana-chan, you should be ashamed of yourself for rp'ing such things~~

*cough* aand onto the real comment... XD

I really loved it, I laughed so much, and smiled and now... cheeks hurt *pout* ... well well, it was forth reading this xDD

can't wait for you to write more! you've been a good girl doing this *pets yer head* ^^

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 21:28:46 UTC
baah, but you should be too then since you're one of the persons I rp smut with! xD

Thank you so much, Kuri-chan, Im really glad you enjoyed it <33

I promise there will be more up soon, so Nana-chan is gonna keep being a good girl and keep Kuri-chan happy xD

(and I hope you'll post some of your stuff soon, Kuri-chaaan...*pout* I really want to read your stories xD)

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kristykama February 10 2008, 21:45:03 UTC
hehe xP I promise the stories will come soon... I know I've said that alot, but I really DO promise~~

heh, and you know, I like it when you keep me happy *giggles*

...that line sounded kinda dirty.. didn't it xD haha

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 21:51:25 UTC
Yeah, you HAVE said that alot xDD

I knoooow, I like it when you keep me happy too *dies laughing*

...yeah..yeah it did, but that's fine, we're all dirty here ^^

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malveillance February 10 2008, 22:55:00 UTC
:3! Finally, someone else who can totally see this pairing working. xD This was really adorable, and I can't wait for the next installment~.
But oh my, Mana... Jealous! xD I couldn't help laughing at that~ ♥

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 23:23:26 UTC
Haha, I must admit I was a bit doubtful to it at first, but as I got into it I thought "Hey, it's a totally believeable thing that could get them together, so it works xD"

Thank you kindly for both reading and commenting, comments fuels my will to write, and I promise to update asap! <33 Glad to know my works are appreciated :3

Haha! I thought most people would laugh at Saga, but it seems Mana being jealous was more Lulz than Saga xDD

<333

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malveillance February 10 2008, 23:26:14 UTC
xD Aw, I did laugh at Saga, and actually I could only guess he wouldn't be going as Luigi when there was much funnier outcomes. >:3

But Mana being jealous seems like a very rare thing, because he's always so pretty *_*

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neo_arumina February 10 2008, 23:28:57 UTC
xD glad Saga did make some Lulz too 8D *avoids one of Saga's shoes* >>;;

Yeah it does, but..I couldn't...help it 8D;;

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aniffa February 11 2008, 01:42:16 UTC
Awesome job! I'm sure I'll be laughing for months now with that wonderful picture of Saga you made.

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neo_arumina February 11 2008, 08:19:34 UTC
Thank you kindly, aniffa! <333 Im really glad I managed to be funny x3

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silverxhoshi March 10 2008, 01:36:06 UTC
Haha!

"The little man was such a perfect depiction of femininity, even Mana looked jealous." Funny xD

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neo_arumina March 13 2008, 20:14:42 UTC
heehee xD Arigatou~

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