Neo Tokyo High [Ch.8/x]

[neo_vizualism]

Title: Neo Tokyo High
Author: neo_vizualism    
Band(s): the GazettE, 雅-MIYAVI- (more to come)
Pairing(s): AoixUruha, RukixKai, MiyavixKai, ReitaxRuki (more to come)
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): MalexMale, foul language
Synopsis: Shiroyama Yuu, the most un-accepted student at Neo Tokyo High. He's quiet, shy, sensitive and friends with the most unpopular girl at school.

Comments

[dyedbyfilth]

Aw, Reita! I love how Ruki is blunt and isn't detered from what he wants... But... REITA! POOR REITA!

And is it... weird that I'm more interested in Ruki's character and what he's thinking and going through? Hmm. well then..

Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next part!

[lashy337]

Reita and Ruki... Ahh, poor Reita! But at the same time, I want Ruki to be able to be with Kai! I want to know what he's thinking, he seems to be a very thoughtful person.

Kai and Miyavi... You go, Kai! Tell him off! xD I'm glad he told him no, but still let him take him out. I'm excited to see where Miyavi decides to take him.

Aoi and Uruha... Ahhh! So beyond awkward! xD

Taeko... D8!!! What's going to happen to her? Update, update, update!

[pokky4ever]

I can't say I'm really excited for ReitaxRuki(since I don't really dig this pairing), but Miyavi and Kai are cool! I mean, Miyavi steal kisses, but Kai's still able to push him off a bit... well, honestly, I think everyone's kissing too early, I mean, for me it's going too fast with the kissing.. Yeah, I just wanted to give an honest comment.

And NO! Taeko! T_T I happen to love Taeko, so I'm waiting for the next chapter!

[dyedbyfilth]

Well I think the kissing is fitting according to character. If you think about those who has kissed as of yet, it was Reita kissing Ruki [as well as Ruki kissing Reita at some point], Ruki kissing Kai and Miyavi kissing Kai [and of course Kai kissing back]. Reita kissed Ruki as a display of affection, because he's too nervous and tongue-tied to say his feelings [or was] and Ruki kissed Reita as an experiment to, probably, see what emotions and feelings he feels during the kiss with Reita compared to Kai

[pokky4ever]

O_O

Now that you mention it, it is true according to characters... urgh, I feel sort of ignorant to not having thought of that.

[neo_vizualism]

Very well done. Its seems you've been able to decipe each of the characters reasons and personalities. Well, Ruki is still quite the mystery though. Very well done, you deserve a pat on the head. (^_^)

[neko_saaa_n]

Waaaaaaa Ruki you mean mean b*** T^T!!! Well.. I kinda understand doh X'D He does like Kai hehe XD
Go Miyavi <3 He is so cute when confused XDDDD
Uruha is soo naive... coff* and Aoi... will he get off the hook whit this o.o'

Poor Taeko T^T!!!! What have you in plan whit her... I want to kick Maora right now >.>'

Nyaaah good job whit this chapter <3 <3 I love it :3

[ayanihime_0909]

kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~!!!
It's getting interesting!!
I love Miyavi and Kai's part..
Poor Rei,,,

Plzz Update sooner!!!
^^