WIP meme

[neochen]

Some are "sequels" of stories, some are AU and some are just football fandom. Some are a paragraph long, or twenty. Most I'll probably not finish. I shouldn't ever start anything new until I get through this list, to be honest. Anyway, feel free to ask what they're about.

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[acchikocchi]

ALL OF THEM.

no really.

okay, fine. if I must pick:

peru to malta
pre-temporada 2000 (I think this is the one you mentioned before, but I want to hear more.)
mori & silva
...okay, fine, dear uncle david. my curiosity cannot be denied.

[neochen]

Peru to Malta is/was this sequel to Il Confine I toyed with, over that summer after Fernando graduates and...moves to Peru, and Raúl's doing a study in Cyprus on "political conditions"... I don't know why it's Peru to Malta, I must have been spacing out majorly. There is currently exactly one sentence in that file. Because it's entirely his fault for being a distant bastard. I kind of liked that that particular Fernando ends up miserable since he's a jackass.

Pre-temporada I'm working out the kinks. I don't remember what pre-season it is, but I have certain characters in my head I want to include (and have included) that would never probably go on their pre-season since they move that summer (Redondo, Bodo, etc), but yes, it's the Long!Hot!Summer with no fan!fic in Austria.

When he emerges, feeling fresh for those few minutes after the cold shower, he sees Raúl has fallen asleep, just like that on the floor, his balled up shirt as a pillow, arms and legs splayed wide, curls sticking to his forehead and temples

[acchikocchi]

Okay, so, the last 48 hours have basically been cornerflag and nothing else but now I can properly comment! Yay!

I kind of liked that that particular Fernando ends up miserable since he's a jackass.

This is true. Though maybe in Peru he can, like, learn? And grow as a person. I'm terminally optimistic. XD

Summer fic: That's really atmospheric, just those few paragraphs. And I love that image of Raul. More of this, please.

Or even hot!sexiness because... like, they're too busy being an awesome team together for me to go on about their bedroom business.

I understand this point of view completely. buuuuut maybe just a scene or two? It's just such a good opportunity, it would be a shame to waste it. Also, it would be tragic if you killed me of UST. ):

Not that I don't understand that point of view completely, seeing as how I write mostly gen, but you could

[neochen]

The Mori and Silva one is where I pretty much want them to do it. Yes. That is the goal. But I have to add all this stuff like plot development and character motivation and whatnot. I just see them as on two different points of the same career trajectory (not that I am wishing Silva would end up retiring quietly after being mistreated or anything, I want him to be really awesome at City and then move to Liverpool and be awesome and then move to Madrid just to be more awesome, but only move because he wants to and because they all love him so much they forgive him anything really), just because throughout their careers, they were both associated-linked up with so early in their career with two amazing forwards that have their own individual legends. And they have only each other to turn to deal with that? Or that Silva seeks his advice? I don't know.

Fernando Morientes calls David Silva on his birthday because he’s a thoughtful guy, and invites himself to Manchester

[worldcoup]

OMGGGGGGG. I want to know about the ones I don't know about. I'm guessing "when domesticity goes bad" = Blue Valentine fic of horror, y/y? CAN YOU PLS WRITE MORE OF THAT? My morbid heart craves it so badly. Then wait, what is single fathers about? Is it DV/DS verse? And :O what is "noxious-escape episode"? And "de peru a malta"? Why are there so many fics on this list I don't know about? I feel betrayed. :P BUT YES SHARE. And write. and write s'more. And s'more and s'more. Pls.

[neochen]

THIS IS MY SINGLE FATHERS ONE: Nurse shakes her head, “Zaida Villa has yet to be picked up. I’ve called her father’s office at least every half hour, but I have to get to the hospital for my shift

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And I wonder if you'll remember the references: A hair’s breadth was the difference between the illusions Laudrup had concocted around him, or the reality of the cells he couldn’t see. But warm, solid arms wrap around him as he scrambles to his feet. “David?” His voice is hoarse. The familiar scent envelopes him. It feels nice. He feels safe and his instincts cannot fight it or the exhaustion he finally allows to overtake him, and he can’t feel the ground anymore even if his legs are moving.

He’s moving, he knows this much but he can’t think to question anything. His head pounds with each stark echo in the brightly lit corridors. When a cold gust of wind tells him he’s outside, he takes a deep, shuddery breath.

“You’ll be alright, now,” a voice to his left murmurs. It sounds familiar, and he manages just to rack through his brain to realise-Raúl. Yes. His body is lead another hundred steps and then, “You can close your eyes now.”

That's the noxious one.

[worldcoup]

I adddeeeed you but you disappear on me. What sort of a relationship is this? Tsktsk.

[neochen]

It's because I'm divorcing you.

[worldcoup]

I have far too man Feelings about your WIPs.

[neochen]

I really need to hustle on these ones.

[worldcoup]

You do.