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May 01, 2004 09:27

Hey everybody, I am writing today because I have written some poems that I want some feedback on ( Read more... )

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angel_liuliu May 1 2004, 07:26:05 UTC
I like them all! lol

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anonymous May 16 2004, 15:50:06 UTC
They suck you need detail in them child you should not write at all. people don't want to read something if there is not description in at all. Whant do you think people are going to like cuz of the song title of it hell no they are not. You really need details in it.

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neogirl_expert May 27 2004, 09:43:20 UTC
Well FYI, you don't have to say that, you could explain what you mean by detail, what do you mean the song sucks?? What do you not like, the words, or just the entire song?? What do you want me to use big long descriptive words that are gonna confuse people?? I can't do that because it wouldn't make anyone happy and that is all I want to do is express myself to the world and make people happy. If I make one person in this world care about themselves, then I ahev made a difference, unlike you who only criticizes people, you should be ashamed of yourself and you didn't even leave your name. Go ahead and criticize my writing but until I know who you are, I am just going to ignore everything you say, and no I don't think they will like it just because of the title!!!!!!!!!

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