Calzona: The ( Not a ) Fairytale 2/?

May 14, 2016 18:10

Title: Calzona - The (Not a )Fairytale ( Read more... )

art:fanfic, fanfic:callie/arizona, fanfic:arizona robbins

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captstarbuck May 14 2016, 19:10:07 UTC
Holy crap. I have no words. I did not see that coming at all. You have to get the next chapter up!

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neolithicdream May 14 2016, 20:40:06 UTC
Well so many people are trying to get their opinion into this fic, Amelia, Webber, Bailey, April. It may take some time. And Callie is in denial. So it may be down to Penny to outline just what she has done. Oh dear. I'm not looking forward to writing this next chapter.

Thanks for commenting even if you have no words! :-D

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elledee68 May 15 2016, 11:55:44 UTC
Wow!
This takes Callie awfulness to a whole new level.
I hope Arizona's okay!
Great writing as always.

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neolithicdream May 15 2016, 14:52:02 UTC
Aah thanks ! 😁

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czee3 May 16 2016, 08:05:19 UTC
Intense! Didn't see that coming. This is a terrific story, different. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

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neolithicdream May 16 2016, 20:17:30 UTC
Thank you! Chapter 3 has been started.

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englishstrawbie May 29 2016, 16:17:59 UTC
Oh Callie, what have you done??!!!

"Maybe it will be because you realise your career is in the toilet. Working for a second rate boss in a second rate Hospital. Maybe it will be because Sofia resents you for uprooting her from her life. Maybe it will be because its just too stifling living in a small two bed apartment in the middle of New York. Whatever the reason you'll blame Penny because you sure as hell won' t blame Callie, will you? Yeah I should feel sorry for her because the moment it gets hard it will be all her fault. Suddenly Perfect Penny won't be so perfect and Poor Callie..."

^^ I like this anger in Arizona and I like this accusation. There's truth in it, it was evident in the next episode when Callie was angry at Penny for no reason other than she didn't get what she wanted from the custody battle.

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neolithicdream May 29 2016, 22:57:57 UTC
This fic started of life as an unapologetic anti Callie story.

But I find it very hard to be too onesided for too long so Callie has got a lot of time to explain here self, far more than intended. However Arizona has every reason to be angry. personally on the show I think It wasnt until the custody battle that Arizona stopped being in love with Callie, and specifically the manner in which Callie allowed her case to be handled was the last straw.

In this fic, Arizona having lost the battle, she has no reason to be anything other than angry and, if she wakes up and if she remembers, then her anger will be to the fore.

But as this has evolved it's becoming a story about self awareness and letting go.

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