Critisize the fuck out of me.

[neonntiger]

But don't be an asshole about it. Here are two links to random Mary Sue fics I've written. They're basically my way of practicing my writing and character development. I obviously used myself as Andrea lol but seriously. It's fun as hell and never ceases to make me laugh even on the worst of days.

Here are two links of my stuff:
http://brananahammock

Comments

[imeantheend]

bb you've disabled anon comments

[neonntiger]

aaaaaand I definately failed at that. brb changing.

you won't let me anon post, but i'll post this anyway. LOL

[alightinthadark]

I think you're pretty cool, creative, and funny. You're gonna be hella popular when you get out of highschool because you're too mature for highschoolers.
I do think you say FML too much, though. It's frustrating to see someone get so upset over the smallest things, because it's not worth it. That's the only bad thing I can think of about you.

Re: you won't let me anon post, but i'll post this anyway. LOL

[neonntiger]

Christ, this is why I love you so gd much. Thank youuuu ♥

Ahd aha that's so true. I'm trying to fix that, believe me. Slowly but surely. I think I'm getting better!

Re: you won't let me anon post, but i'll post this anyway. LOL

[alightinthadark]

it's ok, i used to have the same problem. and then my boyfriend at the time was like I USED TO FEEL THAT WAY BUT THEN I WENT TO CHINA AND SAW HOW SHITTY THEIR LIVES WERE AND IT CHANGED MY LIFE.
and i was like, "you don't fucking get it, man, them having shittier lives than me isn't going to make me feel better.. i'm just going to be like, 'oh, your life sucks too?'" lol.

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[neonntiger]

LOL OMFG IKR, EXACTLY. I hate how people say "Kids in Africa are starving." blah blah blah. I'm always like "Will feeding them solve my problems? No, so stfu about the gd kids in Africa." lol I'm such a bitch.