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neowritersblock

Visitation

Sep 18, 2006 22:03

The Trans-Am starts, purring softly to life; Mac has done so much work under the hood, I am not sure whether there is a combustion engine or an antimatter reactor down there.-I don’t bother to look anymore. MacLoreign is a true virtuoso with all things mechanical-or anything made of metal, for that matter.

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ladyjennbo September 19 2006, 02:15:21 UTC

I like the way the story is going so far. Don't know about the name "Mac" but that's quite a minor complaint. I like the phrase "pocket them" used like that. My mom's middle name is Elaine. Interesting concept here.

neowritersblock September 19 2006, 02:16:58 UTC

Well, Mac is not actually hic name. It's just what Dorian--and everyone else--calls him.

homesick_4lien September 19 2006, 21:16:11 UTC

Yeesss. I like this much.

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An email joke I got. Usually I don't pass these on, but this one seemed right up your alley. doppelgrammar February 21 2007, 06:23:27 UTC

A Montana cowboy was overseeing his herd in a remote mountainous pasture when suddenly a brand-new BMW advanced out of a dust cloud towards him ( ... )