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lvstndhrt September 1 2013, 15:18:45 UTC
Mwahahah.... Licas is such a sucker! Spell or not, I hope Lexi isn't stupid enough to fall for his charms again.

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nepheris September 1 2013, 16:03:32 UTC
He's not weasling himself out of this one :) as for Lexi... We'll have to see!

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lorinsv60 September 1 2013, 15:34:44 UTC
The world you have created is gorgeous!

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nepheris September 1 2013, 15:58:41 UTC
Thank you! :)

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nepheris September 1 2013, 16:04:24 UTC
Didn't really care, but he sure as hell does now >:)

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clericalrodent September 1 2013, 16:55:15 UTC
Oh Licas, I actually felt sorry for him before that ending. I hope he doesn't end up messing things up.

And poor Yelena, there's no way Nikolai won't be rubbing it in how "right" he was about Licas.

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nepheris September 1 2013, 17:02:37 UTC
All he got was a chance, the rest is up to him :-) he didn't get a love spell or potion.
(I basically had to recreate the hood due to issues and everyone's relationships got more or less reset, the 'spell' reflects that)

Of course Nikolai is going to be a little shit about it! He wouldn't be himself if he didn't :D

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nyanalian September 1 2013, 16:58:04 UTC
What an entertaining chapter! Faelyn scared the hell out of me when she appeared in front of Licas with that angry face. I love your story and how detailed it is: the window actually broke and that's one of those small things that make the difference.

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nepheris September 1 2013, 17:07:06 UTC
Faelyn can be very scary when she wants to. She's good, but not necessarily nice!

And thank you :) I don't really consider it a story as s much as a 'creative retelling of gameplay' (the core of what happens in the updates more or less happened that way in the game). I do try to make it interesting tho :)

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