A Few Words to Begin Our Fantastical Tale

Mar 06, 2010 03:23

     Remember the days? The ones where we spent in my father’s study, listening to his stories from the lands he visited.  Tales of exotic lands, of great monsters of the sea, of kings dressed in finest silks, of the rolling clouds as his ship zoomed on by ( Read more... )

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carmentakoshi March 6 2010, 21:26:54 UTC
BRB LOVING THIS DRABBLE FOREVER because now there is context to the story and I can begin to work on a gimmicky summary for the user info page. XD

Also, I have a weakness for lines like "Do you remember that also?", etc, etc. So much love.

asdfghjkl I will steal lines from this for the user info page, kthx. ♥

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chaoticdance March 6 2010, 23:20:21 UTC
YAY! :D I tried re-writing a couple of paragraphs that were the most sketchy and tried to add some detail to them.

GOOD! :D I think memory is one of the main themes so "Do you remember?" is like, one of the arc phrases of the story(I was about to write game for some reason).

x333~

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