Sentiments [CNU/Sandeul]

[nephre]

Corporate!AU
Installment II.
with established relationships
non-chronological
(previous installments: I.)

Sentiments | CNU/Sandeul, hinted CNU/Jinyoung | R | 1700w.

Comments

[greyjoyofpyke]

AHHHH!!!!!!! i don't even know what to say! this was really good. you really have a way with words and conveying scenes. everything flows so seamlessly. i love how their relationship unfolds in a series of coincidences. the entire sofa scene had me reading between my fingers.

What Dongwoo didn’t account for when he slumped against the couch, still hard, was Junghwan slipping between his legs, unzipping his pants, tugging down his briefs, nuzzling his face into Dongwoo’s crotch. He didn’t account for Junghwan, in his clouded state, sucking him off and making obscene noises that drove Dongwoo crazy. He didn’t account for his own hand reaching to grasp Junghwan’s hair, his own hips thrusting shallowly as he fucked Junghwan’s mouth. He didn’t account for the come that trickled down the sides of Junghwan’s mouth as Junghwan looked up at him through his disheveled fringe.really can i just scream at this entire part

[nephre]

Thank you for leaving a lovely comment!

Haha writing sex scenes makes me really uncomfortable, so I'm glad you liked them!

This part actually takes place after the drabble in the previous installment where Jinyoung kisses Sandeul right after hiring him.

We always need more Shindeul in fandom!! T~~~~T

[mon_cheiri]

I loooove the way Jinyoung is characterized in your writing in this story; he's written so... truly? I don't really know how to put it, it's not that he seems very much like the real B1A4 Jinyoung (because we have no idea what his personality is really like lol), but his character is just very honest and I just like it very much (I'm rambling omg I'm sorry)

anyways, I do very much love this corporate AU, and if you're planning to write more, I look forward to it!!

[nephre]

Thank you so much! I try to make my characters as much like real people as possible, so I'm really happy that you like the characterization!

I'll be adding more as I think of more ideas (and get blocked in the other fics I'm working on, lol)!

[sai12]

Ahh this was very cute!! Although my mind immediately was like "hmm I want more of that Jinyoung kissing him story!!"

But the way you wrote this going back and forth between what will be and what is right now, it was interesting. :)

[xstarlesscity]

"It began as a series of coincidences, being in certain places when moments intersected them, past experiences and situations that eventually unfolded into the picture of Junghwan tangling his hands in Dongwoo’s hair as they moved against each other on the couch..."

now THAT is good fucking writing. that is such a good description of how these things pile up on themselves and happen both accidentally and on purpose... you are a VERY talented writer and i'm so happy you're writing ot5 AND my otp. wow i feel totally spoiled... this au is gonna be one of those ones i keep coming back to, i can tell!

[anticommute]

UWU

how do i scream the feelings that are expressed in "uwu" uwu uwu uwu i loved the progression of this wtf ???? alrkjgklshglskdgj ??????????????????????