Phosphorescent Lights: Chapter 13 [3]

[nerd_san]

Every secret has a price…
Title: Phosphorescent Lights
Summary: A photographer with no memories whose goal in life is to seek out what he has lost; a businessman who swore revenge for the death of his lover while desperately trying to escape his fixated reality. Two entirely different men with entirely different lives bound together by the threads of

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[blue_eye1]

Right now I'm crying and I hate myself for my ideas and theories about this story.
I'm not able to make a coherent comment right now.
I'll do it later after I'll get back from work.

[nerd_san]

Sorry. Really, really sorry D:
^^ Good luck with work ♥

[blue_eye1]

I was thinking about that last scene the whole day and I couldn't help myself from thinking who was shot, how the gun fired and who fired. I've answered myself all questions. But am I right?

I'm so sorry for all of them.
Kazuya and his behavior, well he wants utopia but this time he's right in the middle of action and I think this time his memory should return completely not fading away again.
Jin he must be very lost. The man he loves the most is also the man he hates the most. And there's no one that could help him with his conflicting feelings.
Ryo, I want to hate him, I really do but I just can't. And I totally understand his feelings and actions all his actions(prologue).

Even if you made me cry at the end I really loved the whole chapter with all it's emotions and events.
You're doing a great job ♥
And please update soon, very soon...

[nerd_san]

All will be clear by chapter 14. No, it's okay! I don't mind! It's fun to hear the opinions of others!

Kame...I think more along the lines of him wanting to escape everything and towards his utopia. We'll see.

Yes, Jin's probably the most confused one there - more so than Kame.

I understand Ryo too, and honestly I was scared others wouldn't, haha. He loved Pi. Pi was assassinated. Thus, revenge.

Thank you! I'll update as soon as possible! ♥

[aninhacmpereira]

OMG! Will Kame loose his memories again? A shot? Someone was shot?

I lost all my words... I'm sad for Kame, I'm sad for Jin. I don't like revenge, so I really can't understand that feeling well and I can't understand why the need to kill Kame because of what his father done. It wasn't Kame! Kame didn't do anything, so I really don't understand why they (or just Ryo) want to kill him. I only hope that nothing bad happens to Kame and that Jin will feel guilty because of that.

Please, please, update fast! I really want to know what happens next.

[nerd_san]

Someone, something, nothing, maybe Kame was being delusional. They're all possibilites :D

Guilt...hehe yes...guilt shall move along the next couple of chapters >:) And I'll update as soon as I'm finished writing it XD ♥

[is_kazuchan]

huhuhuhu..

why2... =( please don't saperate jin and kame..
they will hurt n not happy...

pray for them.. don't hurt kame n jin..

[nerd_san]

True love can't be seperated, probably...only...temporarily stored away...^^

[nurfarhanah]

is this going towards the end??

i really love the last part..it make me feel like crying..
waa..i want to read the next chapter..

btw, who's going to be crazy??jin or kame??.

[nerd_san]

Yes, it is :D
I'll update as soon as I can!
Who's going to be crazy? ...um...can I say everyone? :D lol

[nurfarhanah]

hehe..cant wait to see more when i'm still in my good mood..haha..

but i dont want it to end yet..i will miss this fic..>.

[nerd_san]

Well, it's not ending JUST yet...a few more chapters... :D

[magicaltrinity]

HOLY CRAP. WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED?!

I should have been studying instead of reading this. I mean, I have a test tomorrow...But somehow reading this was WAY better than being cooped up in my room reviewing notes on alcoholism and what have you. :D

I can't help but think...Maybe Jin shot himself. I think that's what I would have done if I were in his place. Too much pain and disappointment :(( I feel for him.

I LOVE this fic. But I HATE the cliffhanger. Thinking about what might've happened can keep me up the whole night. :>

PLEASE. PLEASE. I BEG of you. Update soon. I NEED the next chapter :))

[nerd_san]

Revenge just happened! >:D Ugh..studying..I should be doing that too now that you mention it. I have 2 tests on the same damn day -_- lol.

$%^%^&JFGJGF Let's not get all suicidal! Well, then again, Jin shooting himself is a possibility. Not a very nice one...but thanks for giving me ideas >:) *Goes to her lair where evil plots are hatched* XD

I'll update ASAP! I'm just not done the next chapter yet..xD I'm hoping to have it out by tomorrow :D