This is cute. I like the outside POV and Rebecca's awe at Ariadne managing to score not one, but two hot dudes. :P
I had to google to find out whether that kind of pregnancy situation was actually possible, but as it turns out, it is. Nice way to wrap up the mystery.
It's not really concrit, but you might want to edit the link you posted on the kink meme. The one you put down was www. etc., but LJ URL's don't start with www., so when I first copied and pasted it into my browser I got 'Journal Not Registered'. Glad I took the time to retype the URL, though. :)
Thanks so much! I like Rebecca, she may pop up in other places...
Whenever I write a story featuring things I'm not sure about, I always research to the fullest and when I found out that they could both be the dads, I was super thrilled.
Yeah, I'm kinda new to the whole posting thing. I need a bit more practice lol.
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I had to google to find out whether that kind of pregnancy situation was actually possible, but as it turns out, it is. Nice way to wrap up the mystery.
It's not really concrit, but you might want to edit the link you posted on the kink meme. The one you put down was www. etc., but LJ URL's don't start with www., so when I first copied and pasted it into my browser I got 'Journal Not Registered'. Glad I took the time to retype the URL, though. :)
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Whenever I write a story featuring things I'm not sure about, I always research to the fullest and when I found out that they could both be the dads, I was super thrilled.
Yeah, I'm kinda new to the whole posting thing. I need a bit more practice lol.
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