KHR Request Drabbles~ :D

Feb 02, 2008 18:55

Title: ‘Lover Boy’
Rating: G
Pairing: Hints of Lal/Colonello.
Warnings: Colonello’s singing voice, abuse of the word 'kora'.
Summary: [Request and prompt for villanelle_koi.] In which Colonello learns that serenades are not the best way to make a first impression. [Pre-Series.]
Gently play on your heart strings, be your valentino just for you… )

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kiku February 3 2008, 00:15:09 UTC
G-Guh, I died from the cute. ;~;

And that had been fine by Takeshi, who always used to hold Tsuna’s left. fffalslkd I love this line! And I also love that Gokudera is being mentioned so much♥♥♥

Uwahhh. -fangirls♥-

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kiku February 3 2008, 00:40:55 UTC
Also adding on that I loved the childhood vignettes. Sososo cute. And the Disney World one! ♥ Oh, Xanxuus~♥♥♥

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 05:12:25 UTC
A-aw, further thank yous, for reading them at all. And Ololol, Xanxie. &hearts

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 05:11:33 UTC
afuiaufg no dead Margies, please. D:

Haha, I'm sorry if Gokudera wasn't supposed to be mentioned, orz. My beta for this said it was difficult to see the leap in time, so I tried to use that as something that showed the difference in the two tenses.

Soooo glad you like it, thank you. &hearts *v*

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schizocherri February 3 2008, 00:35:41 UTC
Aww! I like everthing. My favorites would have to be Xanxus and Squalo in Disney World and the childhood vignettes, especially Hibari's. It's cute while still being violent.

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 05:17:45 UTC
That's kind of you to say so, thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed them. Hibari's was the most fun to write, I have to say. :) Thanks, hon.

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schizocherri February 3 2008, 05:24:26 UTC
He-he. You're welcome. I can't wait for the rest, either.

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 10:16:59 UTC
That's quite the cute icon you've got there~ :'D

Well, now that I know someone out there is up for more, I'll definitely have to get started on the next batch soon! &hearts

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So Good islanderfan2 February 3 2008, 00:46:53 UTC
Magnificent writing as always across all vignettes - mysterious, funny, sad, deranged and happy in all the right places. You have a way of making any character seem real. So,even though the young Prince is so scary psychotic, you somehow understand him, freaky cool. Thanks so much!

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:'D nerdraeg February 3 2008, 11:12:03 UTC
Thank you for all of your help with reading them over.

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deru_kaiser February 3 2008, 00:59:46 UTC
I LIKE THEM ALL! *___* Especially your 8027 (OMG YAMAMOTO♥) and your vignettes and the Varia fic and and just EVERYTHING ELSE♥ Good work on all of them! :D

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 11:13:28 UTC
Wow! Haha, thanks so much, and for reading them all, to boot! (Yamamoto is my favourite to write, notgonnalie. &hearts ) Thank you, once again, for such a kind comment!

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asaphira_sachi February 3 2008, 01:12:52 UTC
I think my ColoLal fangirlness just got boosted higher by your fic. That was just SO DARN CUTE XDD I love the level of cleverness and spunk that Colo has. The trail-off "kora" had me in a whale of laughter.

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nerdraeg February 3 2008, 11:22:58 UTC
With the new chapter out, CxL love is well-placed right now. I'm glad the writing met expectations. :D &hearts It's a fun relationship to play with, that's for sure.

Haha, wow, thanks. Hearing all of this = one very happy writer. :'D

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