it's simple really.

Dec 17, 2009 22:32



1864 words.
onho.
PG-15 for kissing in shabby washroom stalls? and swearing and underage drinking. :)
for theriverrunsred :)
also, wrote this while eating only waffles and hot chocolate. so yeah.
& if there's many spelling mistakes, forgive me. :)

it's  s i m p l e  really.

Jinki didn't know what he was doing there.

It was stupid, he was stupid for actually letting ( Read more... )

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xxqod December 18 2009, 19:19:48 UTC
THis!!
JongKey ditching Onew for sex, which turned out to be shop-hopping xD
And Minho playing Onew! and typical JongKey to interrupt them and then laughing at him for being a pedophile xD
When Key said he wouldn't want to have sex with Jonghyun I was laughing so hard, their arguments are always so funny xD

Yay for Onho for liking each other so soon!
It's really funny and smexy xD ^^
<3 ~~

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nerdspam December 18 2009, 19:31:20 UTC
YOU! LOL :D
jongkey bffness is my favorite. muaha.
and YAAY FOR ONHO! i had so much trouble writing this, you wouldn't believe. *claps happily*

beer does speed up and increase hormones, so yeah. blame that. (:

thanks for reading and liking it! ♥

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evilish33 December 18 2009, 20:39:47 UTC
OMG!
Minho's like a total pimp, going into a bar and picking up older guys! XD

Sigh, I just curse JongKey for having to get in their way ._. Couldn't they just go off and have sex with each other so Onew and Minho could get it on? >3 lol

I ask for too much D:

That was super funny!

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nerdspam December 18 2009, 21:08:39 UTC
i don't even know how he became like that, but he did, HAHA :D

i know, i should've made jongkey have wild, crazy sex in the back of a stranger's car,
i don't know why i didn't. shame on me. D:

haha, that's okay. ask for more! (:<
thanks for reading! ♥

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conditionally December 18 2009, 22:14:07 UTC
totally not horrible ♥

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nerdspam December 18 2009, 22:22:18 UTC
hey, it's you, i read your stories (:
yay, thanks! :D♥

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conditionally December 18 2009, 22:40:05 UTC
orly :D

yes it was really cute. i liked it :3

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nerdspam December 18 2009, 22:54:18 UTC
yes, you're awesome o//o

dies. i'm glad, it thought it didn't turn out very well. :P

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numptysmeg December 18 2009, 23:21:46 UTC
*melts into a puddle*

Poor Jinki and Minho. Just when it was getting good.

But eeeek! cute

p.s. I has the same shirt that's in your DP.. sadly I don't have the man in it :'(

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nerdspam December 19 2009, 03:22:01 UTC
ikr? jonghyun and key are such cockblockers. (;

heh, it's a funny shirt. :D
it'd be better with jinki though.

thanks for reading! ♥
btw, i love your pic. AHA. :D

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numptysmeg December 19 2009, 03:23:44 UTC
I think there should be a none cockblocked sequel ^_^ haha Silly Jongkey

and thanks!

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nerdspam December 19 2009, 03:49:41 UTC
if i get good ideas, for sure i'll make one. >:D
and involve jongkey rape romance.
AHA. (;

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eijifujiryoma December 18 2009, 23:38:43 UTC
*o*...Oh. Why wasn't it longer. *sob*

And as they made their way out of the club, Jonghyun and Kibum arguing close behind, Jinki felt no need to question what he was doing there. Instead, ask why he wasn't there in the first place.

For some reason, that made me laugh. XD
And poor Jonghyun! Blond idiot, the blond one, sounds like a lot of fun to tease him. Kekeke...
Write more! We need more Tofuho! :D

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nerdspam December 19 2009, 03:25:42 UTC
it wasn't longer cause i ran outta ideas halfway through /ashamed.

baha, i thought it was ubercheesey. maybe that's why? (';

jonghyun is an easy target for abuse, it's so obvious.
i forsee onho in my future.. haha, lame. xD

thanks for reading and liking ♥

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