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neros_violin

FIC: Come On In My Kitchen

Apr 04, 2011 08:36

Title: Come On In My Kitchen
Author: neros_violin
Genre: Sam, Dean - Gen
Rating: PG, for language
Word Count: 1350
Warnings: Spoilers for episode 6.16
Summary: Sam, Dean, and Jim Beam have a conversation.
Author's Notes: Written for the first round of silverbullets, inspired by fleshflutter's prompt one day it will be us. It kind of turned out to be a coda for 6.16. I hope I did it ( Read more... )

spn, fic, challenges

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neros_violin April 4 2011, 22:23:56 UTC

Thank you! <3!

whitereflection April 4 2011, 16:27:02 UTC

What a perfect combination of bittersweet and adorable. ♥

neros_violin April 4 2011, 22:24:14 UTC

Thank you! *smishes boys* Glad you enjoyed it!

callistosh65 April 4 2011, 18:40:10 UTC

Lovely. I really liked the two of them playing up roles they know are expected from each other, a whole lot of unspoken things going spoken underneath.

neros_violin April 4 2011, 22:25:01 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comment! I was going for that, but I worried that it wouldn't come through very well (SUBTLE, WHAT IS THAT). So I am very pleased to hear that it did for you. :D

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neros_violin April 4 2011, 22:26:16 UTC

Thank YOU for the lovely feedback! I really wanted to write pure schmoop, but the prompt kept steering me towards angst. I'm really happy the tone worked for you!

zoemathemata April 4 2011, 19:58:42 UTC

But the relief is as automatic as Sam’s response, because he honestly has no idea what he’d do if Dean couldn’t pull himself back together, put his armor back on.
Excellent line!

Oh, the ending made me smile so much! So wonderful! GREAT JOB, BB!

neros_violin April 4 2011, 22:26:36 UTC

Couldn't have done the ending without you, bb. You win at everything.