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neros_violin

Fic: Other Worlds Than These

Jun 13, 2011 18:36

Title: Other Worlds Than These
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Word Count: 2,100
Warnings: spoilers up to and including 6.19 “My Heart Will Go On”
Author's Notes: Written for __tiana__'s prompt 'kissing in a closet' for the 2011 spnspringfling challenge! Many thanks to scintilla10 for the beta work, and to chaviola and locknkey for the late night chat support. :D

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fic, challenges, sam/dean

Comments 41

tesserae_ June 14 2011, 02:34:43 UTC

This is gorgeous, and I love the sweat-dripping physicality of it and the way you contrast that with what feels like transcendance: Dean’s mouth isn’t perfect; his lips are chapped and dry, his breath is stale from not eating lunch, and it’s still the best mouth Sam’s ever kissed, the first and the last is a great line...

neros_violin June 17 2011, 03:04:21 UTC

Thank you so much! This comment made me smile like whoa. :D

philomel June 14 2011, 03:42:12 UTC

Beautiful and visceral. The end aches so much knowing that this is part of the canonical AU of 6.19... just another thing taken away from them. Guh.

neros_violin June 17 2011, 03:04:54 UTC

Thank you, bb! I didn't mean to make it sad, but ... yeah. I started thinking about a what-if world. I'm glad it worked for you!

mdlaw June 14 2011, 03:58:47 UTC

I was looking for more of this timeline where Ellen is alive and with Bobby. Beautiful. m :)

neros_violin June 17 2011, 03:05:23 UTC

Thanks, hon! It was tempting to write the Ellen and Bobby show, actually. ;)

runedgirl June 14 2011, 04:28:56 UTC

I am so happy right now. *grins stupidly* Thank you :)

neros_violin June 17 2011, 03:06:14 UTC

I am so happy to have made you happy, bb! :D Smiles all around. And also... <33333! I am pretty much salivating in anticipation of your Big Bang. *GRABBY HANDS* SO EXCITED!

chemm80 June 14 2011, 05:21:12 UTC

This was, for real, one of my favorites from the exchange. There's something about this description:

He tugs Dean closer, shoves his thigh in between Dean’s legs, pushing up into the hard heat of Dean’s cock. He’s tempted to rock up, to let Dean ride the big muscle in his leg until he comes wet and messy in his jeans,

...I don't even know, it just...gets to me. So much emotion, too. Just gorgeous.

neros_violin June 17 2011, 03:07:12 UTC

Squeee, bb, thank you so much! I am so happy you liked it, and it just flatters me all to heck that you enjoyed the descriptions, because I think you're so great at creating wonderful descriptions yourself! <3