Comments | neros_violin: Fic: Five Times (After)

neros_violin

Fic: Five Times (After)

Feb 18, 2013 21:47

Title: Five Times (After)
Author: neros_violin
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~2300
Warnings: none
Summary: Five times Jared sees Jensen, after.
Author’s Notes: Written for the last year of j2_everafter, for the prompt Miracle. Thanks to the awesome mods for running such a wonderful community that produced so many wonderful stories over the years!

Thanks also to scintilla10 for the ( Read more... )

fic, challenges, j2 everafter, five times, j2 au, j2

Comments 45

equally_dour March 2 2013, 16:22:06 UTC

That was lovely!

neros_violin March 20 2013, 02:53:51 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

dugindeep March 4 2013, 19:49:05 UTC

I also can't comprehend you - YOU - writing a fic without any sexual touching or objectification ever ;-)

Man, have I missed your words. Even something as small and tight as this reminds me how of great you are weaving the emotions into characters without even having to say much. My only complaint is I would love to see more of these guys - the before, the hurty afters, the struggle to make it work now, all of it, just because the glimpse here is so delicious. ♥

neros_violin March 20 2013, 02:54:10 UTC

I KNOW, RIGHT? WHAT IS HAPPENING TO MY BRAIIIIINNNNNNNNNN? *SOBBING*

neros_violin March 20 2013, 02:55:40 UTC

Oops, premature sending and I don't have comment editing abilities any more. :)

Anyway, thank you for the lovely comment, bb! Re: seeing more - I actually have all that stuff you want to see more of conceptualized, but didn't have time to write it all before this challenge, LOL. So maybe, one day. I have their junior hockey meet-cute written down already, anyway. ;)

<3

dugindeep March 20 2013, 14:23:30 UTC

Well now that you've said it, you have to post it! :D

enablelove March 15 2013, 03:58:57 UTC

Oh my heart hurt a little, but you made it better!

I've missed your lovely writing :)

neros_violin March 20 2013, 02:56:02 UTC

Thank you so much, sweetie! I'm glad you enjoyed! *glomp hugs*

borgmama1of5 July 19 2013, 03:48:24 UTC

Very well done stylistically, managing to tell the whole backstory on the side...and a nice story it is!

kusi4 February 21 2018, 12:16:29 UTC

Aww my heart was hurting for both of them by this point, "One night near the end of the tournament, after more drinks than he should have had and going on nowhere near enough sleep, Jared showed up outside of Jensen's room. He doesn't know exactly what he said, but he can recall the pinched look of guilt on Jensen's face as he'd stood silently and stoically through Jared's rant about all they'd given up, all they could have had. The next morning in the locker room, Jensen didn't say anything, but he nodded at Jared with an expression of apology and acknowledgment, and that, well. It helped." So much emotion in a kind of pared down story.