I like this for a couple reasons. The first being that I can actually relate to it because I developed a similar viewpoint several years ago. It doesn't feel like something that was written to portray an image of how you'd like to be seen. It feels real, because it is.
The second is the casual structure of it. It feels like something that could have been part of a conversation, and it was easy to read. (Some poetry is sort of a drag when you constantly have to stop and try to figure out where to pause so things sound right.)
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The second is the casual structure of it. It feels like something that could have been part of a conversation, and it was easy to read. (Some poetry is sort of a drag when you constantly have to stop and try to figure out where to pause so things sound right.)
Thanks for sharing.
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I'm sorry that you feel the same way. It must be nice for people who can just enjoy themselves,
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