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PMD: Every Moment Counts

Feb 20, 2010 04:53

For fandomwords100 (GO TEAM FIRE!)
Also, hey, it fits a prompts for 24_times nicely. ^^
Prompt: Heartbreak // Time Is An Illusion
Fandom: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness
Warnings: MASSIVE SPOILERS!
Title: Every Moment Counts
Rating: K+
Pairings: Nostalgiashipping (Hero/Grovyle) implied, but can be taken as strong friendship.
Words: 100 on the nose.
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24 times, fandomwords100, pokemon mystery dungeon, fic

Comments 7

rosehiptea February 20 2010, 21:36:57 UTC

I like that. It seems very IC and I like the emotions.

netbug009 February 21 2010, 11:00:21 UTC

Thanks! :D

kitsuneasika February 20 2010, 22:10:43 UTC

This is pretty much my OTP for the Mystery Dungeon gams, and I just love this. So sad and sweet.

netbug009 February 21 2010, 11:00:00 UTC

Hehe I think I'm starting to really like this ship too. Like, I wonder if I've liked it all along because I keep writing fics about Hero and Grovyle but I'm also such a Rendshipper. Darnit. xD

usamichan13 February 21 2010, 02:50:09 UTC

That was so sweet! I really enjoyed it ^^

I got a little confused with the last line though. I thought the story was more focused on the Hero, then the last line switched it to Grovyle. lol Sorry, I'm rambling. Still a great fic!

netbug009 February 21 2010, 10:55:50 UTC

The last line was actually intended to be from Hero's POV still. Darn, did that come across as a POV switch? D: I always had under-discriptiveness issues.

usamichan13 February 22 2010, 02:25:55 UTC

Nah, it's all right. I think the only reason I thought it switched POVs is because the story talked about 'she', and the last line said 'He had no idea.' So I thought it switched to Grovyle.