[ Juu san ] Love comes in gashes sown across my heart.

[neuroticsand]

There was sugar on his lips
and misfortune at his fingertips;
when he turned to me and whispered,
slipped his fingers 'round my heart.
He squeezed it tight and told me
He'd never let me go. And I -
a fool beleived him so,
I wrapped myself inside him;
He ripped out all of me,
and I - a fool, deserved it.

Comments

[waterfell]

Well. It's better-written anyway~

So glad you didn't disappoint me, Shukaku! &hearts

[neuroticsand]

Glad you enjoy it, Mercury~

[waterfell]

You should write something just for me sometime~

[neuroticsand]

Oh, just for you~?
I'll contemplate it.

[sacrificia_l]

...

[neuroticsand]

Touched?

[sacrificia_l]

Mystified.

[lady_azula]

How endearing.

[neuroticsand]

Had to indulge; couldn't help it~

[lady_azula]

An adequate musing. I like it!

[watanukichan]

Huh?

[neuroticsand]

What a surprise~

[watanukichan]

I don't get it.

[neuroticsand]

Not a surprise ~ !

[vainvampire]

Bravo! A poet after my own heart ~ ♥

[neuroticsand]

Miss Elda. Where have you been lately?
Keeping busy I assume?

[vainvampire]

Sleeping, mostly. Trying to get my hands on that Fei Wong Reed bastard for making Sweetness go nuts though that's partially my fault.

You enjoy the latest bit of insanity in this place? I think I bit the wrong person this month ~ ♥

[neuroticsand]

Very much so. Pity you missed out on so much ~
Mm this place has been ever so delightful lately.