100 words: Bend

[nevarra]

1/9/07 
100 words: "Bend"

As much as I’ve grown to dislike snow and winter, I’ve always found it to be a lovely sight to see snow covered trees. It seems so elegant and graceful how the pristine snow, unmarred by dirt and time, sits so heavily on the branches, bending them with its weight. They seem so close to breaking with that soft powder,

Comments

[liminalia]

I like the underlying idea. I think it just needs polishing, elimination of sentence fragments and so on, but that's not the point here--the point is just to write, so don't stress about it.

[nevarra]

True, but I like and appreciate the feedback about it. I've used fragments in some stuff and it helps but in this I think it just takes away from it. I agree that the concept was good. But it just didn't come out and well as the picture I saw in my mind. But hey...that's what the practice is for right? Hopefully at the end, to get better. (s) Thanks, C!

[liminalia]

Psst--you dated it '06. :P

[nevarra]

Eep! Thanks! I've done that with all of them I think. lol

[lotushands]

Yum!