feedback

[neverbethesame]

so i posted my new music on my last post...can people give me some feedback. anyway, i'll be 18 tommorow, so call me and wish me happy birthday. also, i am booking a show in january. just a heads up if you're in a band looking for a show. i'm recording more saturday so if you liked the first song keep checking back and giving me feedback.

Comments

[fiercebronson]

You should have made the link clickable. You would have gotten a way better response.

Random comments as I'm listening...

The music/songwriting is good. You aren't singing with confidence. The rythm guitar part is a bit redundant. I like the title of the song. I like the chorus alot. There isn't enough definition between parts. verse/chorus/bridge/etc. I like how you go up an octave at the end but if you can't hit it clean I wouldn't do it. I like the lead guitar part.

Overall it's really good but needs some polish.

[neverbethesame]

thanks man. like i said, it's only demo, so my vocals/guitar parts were a bit rushed and unpolished but believe it or not i did sing with confidence, i'm just not that good. but thanks for the positives.

[fiercebronson]

Well you asked for feedback...

[neverbethesame]

did it seem like i didn't appreciate it? i didn't mean to come off that way. i did. thanks alot, and thanks for taking the time to listen. keep it coming with my future stuff...i was just letting you know it will improve with recordings with more effort. thanks.

[neverbethesame]

thanks for the card...and for not liking something about my song.
pshh

yo

[anonymous]

i liked it. Chris Henry. be home and see u soon. much love