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neverspilt

If We Were So Down, We'd Up and Leave

May 13, 2011 20:40

Title: If We Were So Down, We'd Up and Leave
Pairing: Iker Casillas/Cesc Fabregas
Rating: NC17 (language, sex, and the like)
Disclaimer: This didn't happen.
Words: 4,548
Summary: Cesc is young and rich and confused, and Iker is his gardener. ( Footballkink2 prompt, obviously.)

( Sometimes ups / Outnumber the downs / But not in Nottingham )

char.: cesc fabregas, team: the arsenal, fandom: english premier league, fandom: la liga, porn!!!1!, genre: au, char.: iker casillas, team: hala madrid

Comments 39

gogoabroad May 14 2011, 04:05:24 UTC

Oooooooooh....how lovely!
Definitely cooking is important thing to seduce. i got that.
and thanks!!

neverspilt May 18 2011, 21:55:58 UTC

Ty! :)

falange84 May 14 2011, 10:20:33 UTC

I thoroughly enjoyed this, Jane Austen ending included.

neverspilt May 18 2011, 21:56:08 UTC

Ahah, thanks! :)

hawk_sama May 15 2011, 03:05:21 UTC

What I really loved (well I loved everything) was the part where Iker and Cesc got caught. How you mixed that fact with them having the hottest sex.

And of course the basement part!! So perfect

neverspilt May 18 2011, 21:56:49 UTC

Thank you! :)

sillypiglets2 May 15 2011, 04:07:59 UTC

Fantastic.
I love the characterizations and the way you right. It's amazing.

neverspilt May 18 2011, 21:57:05 UTC

Aw, thanks! I appreciate that :)

influira May 15 2011, 05:27:55 UTC

oh my god, this is just. perfect. i want to write you an essay on just how much i fucking love this. akldjfalkfjal i miss when people would write them. but this is just, really, perfect. like the bits of wit in it just like ahlkdsfahfhahahaha i love the comic relief and like. NO JUST ALL OF THIS IS JUST PERFECT LIKE I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW PERFECT THIS IS alskjfaslkj you wrote one of my favorite iker's ever bc everyone usually writes him like boring as fuck and yours is like. hot. hahahahahahaha. no but i love this. really.

neverspilt May 18 2011, 22:00:28 UTC

Stopppppp, that would be my favorite essay of all time! (Which is saying quite a bit, because I just finished reading a book of George Orwell's essays that I am thoroughly in love with.) No, but really - thank you! I'm glad you liked gardener!Iker, too, because he was tricky. I didn't want to make him too big of a douchebag, but he had to be nasty enough to ... well, you know. Let's just say I think it played out well, ahah :)

Your kind words are much appreciated ♥