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[neverspilt]

There was a short period of time during which A-Team prompts were running rampant over a footballkink2, and ever since I've been trying to write this. It's finally done! (Before my fifteen page paper. dealwithit.gif.)

Title: So Right
Pairing: Alvaro Arbeloa/Raul Albiol
Rating: NC17
Words: 2,014
Summary: Raul Albiol is nicknamed El Chori (this in and of itself

Comments

[freakmejc128]

Anonymity be damned, I must tell you that I am in love with this! I wasn't the OP, but I am definitely one of the people who've been shamelessly encouraging the Arbiol renaissance that struck fbkink.

This is such a wonderful mix of silly adorable boys being immature and rather hot teammates being very adult together. Raul deserves every word of their praise, and Alvaro deserves to have it all to himself. Ah, and I love grumpy grandpa Iker, so perfect.

Fabulous!

[neverspilt]

Aw, you are really too kind. Thank you for deanoning to give me such a lovely comment!

If we're going to be honest I'm completely obsessed with these two, so I am so totally into this renaissance. I want these marrieds to be a permanent fixture in this fandom, and I'll stop at nothing until it happens!

[sumrndmgrl]

lol i thought he was going to be shy at breakfast but he was just ready to tell all the details!

also, all the guys catching a peek? hilarious :) then arby getting frisky and all grabby hands with raul? ungh.

scratching his stomach
a little detail i found so cute for some reason

Much grosser than drool, he thinks.
characters tend to think the cum down the leg thing is hot so i thought it was unique that it grossed arby out haha

great job!

[neverspilt]

characters tend to think the cum down the leg thing is hot so i thought it was unique that it grossed arby out haha

I figured he needed a little humility after all that boasting, y'know?

Thank you! :)

[slyreflection]

AH THANK YOU SO MUCH <3. I LOVE THIS--deanoning here, I'm usually a lurker but I'm the OP for that prompt and this fic. GLORIOUS. I hope you don't mind play-by-play commentary because lovelovelove I want to respond to EVERYTHING:
-unghhh their bff-domesticity <3. so easy even when things have just changed.
-SPAIN NT ENSEMBLE CAST=EPIC. Xabi and Pepe knowing instantaneously something getting laid happened. Grandpa Iker. For a second he doesn't understand what Xabi is asking, but when he sees the heat in Xabi's eyes, a lightning strike of realization hits him. UNF. Of course the A-Team has ~underlying chemistry & sexual tension~. And Sergio's comment lololololol.
-A+ cameo from Gonzalo
-Raul's other hand is reaching back to Alvaro's ass, pressing against him gently. "If you had you whispering, 'Fuck me,' in your ear, you'd be eager too."
"That was really confusing."
THIS LINE KILLED ME DEAD. WITH LOVE.
Thanks again for making my night--no strike, that my month. Amazing fill.

[neverspilt]

Thank you for such a lovely prompt! I couldn't have done it without you :)

Of course the A-Team has ~underlying chemistry & sexual tension~

In my mind, I almost saw this as a prequel to the A-Team threesome I wrote a little while ago, both because the world needs more of these two marrieds as well as the A-Team, and because I love them so much it hurts.

[coldryuuza]

Grandpa Iker, LOL. and of course, Pipita knows :DD

[neverspilt]

;D Thanks for reading!

[neverspilt]

Thanks! :)