olymfics fic? after all this time? (always.)

Jan 24, 2013 23:47


some kind of pair // ao3
liam payne/zayn malik; background liam payne/danielle peazer and zayn malik/perrie edwards
7265, r, angst angst angst!
written for the 1d_olymfics in oct/nov of last year, so keep that timeline in mind pls

liam makes him wonder what his life would be like without him, if their paths had never crossed, and zayn can’t say the same for ( Read more... )

fandom: actual idiots one direction, char.: zayn malik, char.: liam payne

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zombys January 25 2013, 09:09:38 UTC
nope nope nope. this is not okay.

No one would ever say Zayn’s name the way Liam did that night: like it hurt.

i just. please stop it it hurts to much

lets his arms twist around Zayn’s shoulders and hang in front of him, crossed wrists stuck out the window

this paragraph. the imagery. my babes.

also the first two paragraphs. like are you shitting me.

and the just kind of hopeful but complacent ending.

so beautiful.

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iheartvmars07 January 25 2013, 18:01:16 UTC
beautiful but so very painful

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nature_aly January 25 2013, 20:17:16 UTC
This was just wonderful, but somewhat painful. I just want to yell at Liam for being so Liam and always putting himself last. I love the way this ended, with that hopeful feeling. I'm choosing to believe that they're going to get to the happily ever after they deserve, and your narrative just ended a little early.

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sarzworld January 26 2013, 00:33:19 UTC
this was just stunning, and beautiful, and just... it made my heart ache, which i know probably doesn't make that much sense but goodness, it did.

i just, ugh this made my heart just... feel?

it was just beautiful really

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sburet84 January 27 2013, 03:26:17 UTC
really, really sweet and beautiful.

i'm adding you as a friend :)

*samantha*

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