Chapter 3

[nevets820]

This one is short, sorry guys. I just need some time to think out the next part because it's very important. Oh well, enjoy

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[mrloco88]

mmm okies, well as u said it was short. and i know u were having a hard time when u kinda wrote this, weren't exactly in the mood. i noticed u need commas in a few of ur sentences (mostly the ones with "and", bc when u read it u ntice that they could be two sep sent)u did a good job again, however u did more tell instead of say this time around i think. u speak mostly i nthe past if u read it. example