Fanfiction: Time Race

[bendleshnitz1]

Title: Time Race
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1759
Summary: Hannah's being stood up? Find out!
Author's Note: My Beta wasn't able to correct the grammar and spelling in such a short notice. So sorry about the mistakes. It'll be beta-ed with time.
WARNINGS: Kind of a SEQUEL to "Heart of the House". I don’t think it’s absolutely necessary to read that one

Comments

[vegablack62]

I enjoyed reading this. It was very sweet and cute. I liked the part where the doctors kept Neville in the hospital because he didn't know any telephone numbers, but one. I could see them thinking he had a head injury, asking him along with the year and the day of the week the name of the muggle prime minister. He wouldn't know and they'd be sure he had a head injury.

The interaction between Neville and Hannah was lovely.

[bendleshnitz1]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it =)
I could picture that scene in my head too but it didn't come out in words...

[hazy_crazy]

I loved this little "sequel" :D! Again, I adore your Neville and I love your Hannah, too. I liked the fact he went to a Muggle hospital, I dunno, I've never heard that before and it made things interesting! Great job :)

[bendleshnitz1]

Thanks!
I wanted to give Neville an excuse to not being able to go to his date; and in St Mungo's he'll probably be released instantly (I didn't want to hurt him badly, lol)
<3 Nev!
Again, glad you liked it :) And thanks for reviewing