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Fic: He Alone Shall Lead Them (Hannah Abbott/Neville Longbottom, PG)

Jul 23, 2008 21:30

Title: He Alone Shall Lead Them
Author: luvscharlie
Rating: PG
Pairing: Hannah Abbott/Neville Longbottom
Summary: Neville Longbottom never asked to lead Dumbledore's Army, but with Harry Potter gone, they were now his responsibility, and that was not something he took lightly.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fanfiction set in the Harry Potter universe - all ( Read more... )

rating: pg, fanfic

Comments 2

vegablack62 July 24 2008, 20:29:34 UTC

I'm very glad to see this at the NevilleXHannah site. I love this site and wish it would get frequent postings. I reread your story and just wanted to say I thought you did a good job with Neville he seemed canon. I was amused at your Hannah who I never thought of as having a problem with her wand. I love that you had her put a body-bind on him. Poor Neville how he must hate that curse. He seems to be hit with it at the most horrible times, and now twice by girls he likes.

luvscharlie July 24 2008, 20:46:14 UTC

It just seemed like it was time for Neville to have the upper hand, because he's clearly the more dedicated of the two of them in the story, and in prior years it seemed that what Hannah did was exactly what would have been the fate of the poor individual ill fated enough to stand too close to Neville with a wand.