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Fic: After an Afternoon

Jun 21, 2009 21:38

Title: After an Afternoon
Author: jamieln612
Pairing: Neville/Hannah
Rating: R
Warnings: Sexual Situations, Minor Language
Word Count: 1828
Summary: The end of the day brings surprises to them both.
Author’s Note: This is my first time writing both of these characters and this pairing, so I really hope it works. Any suggestions or comments are welcome. The ( Read more... )

fanfic, rating: r

Comments 2

vegablack62 June 22 2009, 08:33:58 UTC

This was just lovely. I liked the way they interact here. I especially loved the dirt that Neville missed on his face and the way Hannah thought it was cute. I loved the way Neville wouldn't watch her in a way that would be obvious. You are right they are shy people, who wouldn't be shy with each other.

jamieln612 June 22 2009, 19:04:01 UTC

Thank you for reading, I really appreciate it. The dirt part was one of my favorites to write, even after the war I still picture him as a little awkward. I'm happy you thought I got some of their characterizations down. I'm glad you liked this :)