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[FIC] Our different pasts, Our intertwined present Chap 29

Sep 09, 2008 23:00

Chapter 29

Kim Junsu fell to the ground with a loud thud as he felt Yoochun’s weight on him.

“Yoochun? Yah… Park Yoochun! Are you alright? Answer me!”

Junsu asked anxiously. Yoochun was sprawled on him, unmoving. Everything happened so quickly that he did not know if Yoochun was shot. His hands were still tied ( Read more... )

Comments 32

chloe1910 September 9 2008, 15:38:23 UTC

Kyah!! Finally, stupid Junsu finally realised how important Yoochun is to him and confesse his feelings!!!!

Though I'm happy with the Yoosu, Kangin that bastard might still be free after 48 hours of detention.

I hope they find new evidence soon. Perhaps the only way is to have his cohort (the spy) to surrender himself to the police and confess.

newbie_tortoise September 10 2008, 09:01:21 UTC

hee... glad you're happy with the yoosu... truly finally.... haha... thanks for commenting!!! ^_^

kizay September 9 2008, 16:22:04 UTC

WAH! Oh yes. Finally.

Sorry, I don't think I have really made an effort to comment in all of the chapters but I absolutely love this fic.

There. I said it. XD

newbie_tortoise September 10 2008, 09:01:49 UTC

aww.... thanks so mucu for loving it!!!! ^_^

aeri__iijiri September 9 2008, 17:23:28 UTC

i'm happy i'm happy with this chapter and omfg, i gotta go eat breakfast and go to school!!! DDDD:
thanks for the wonderful update~~~ <3 <3
i love you very much very much indeed and etc etc <3~
[jets away]

newbie_tortoise September 10 2008, 09:02:32 UTC

i love you too for your lovely comments!!!! i hope you weren't late!!! thanks for reading!!!! ^_^

feyla September 9 2008, 17:36:17 UTC

I just read this yesterday or the day before or something for the first time and now another chapter! I've really enjoyed reading it so far. I have to say though, that I don't like the fact that Yunho was missing during all of this.

newbie_tortoise September 10 2008, 09:03:24 UTC

glad to know i have a new reader!!! glad you enjoy it!!!!

crazyoverbishie September 9 2008, 17:50:34 UTC

reserved a spot...

*yawn*

crazyoverbishie September 9 2008, 18:00:24 UTC

wow...i cant just leave it...

OMG...junsu is make me worried...im glad everything is getting better....and yoosu is finally together rite... XXXDDDD

is not the end rite??? you're not gonna stop it here rite???

pls do write more...ill be waiting for another great pieces from you...^^

newbie_tortoise September 10 2008, 09:04:18 UTC

hee... i wish i could stop it at their happiest moment... keke... there are more chapters coming up! ^_^ thanks for your comments!!!!