Comments | newerakb: wow, writeclub

newerakb

wow, writeclub

Feb 22, 2007 01:33

The concept of “can’t” disappears; all you know is “must". Coherent thought has become a luxury unknown to you. On the surface, love. Dig deeper, loneliness.

Already she’s close. The city street surroundings have all but disappeared in your focus. Nothing but a long column of colorless nothing, what the universe was before the universe existed. At ( Read more... )

Comments 11

anonymous February 22 2007, 13:46:38 UTC

You should right more often, because I was really amazed and enticed in your story. Really awesome and I really liked your technique of writing.

-Bryan

newerakb February 22 2007, 18:24:29 UTC

thanks yo

wow supahtonto February 22 2007, 18:48:18 UTC

that was gay.

Re: wow newerakb February 22 2007, 19:11:03 UTC

no you are the one who is gay!

Re: wow supahtonto February 22 2007, 19:11:52 UTC

holy shit you fag.

Re: wow supahtonto February 23 2007, 04:50:07 UTC

someone's got the right idea.

ziggyj177 February 23 2007, 02:39:14 UTC

I will pay you a hundred dollars to unpost this....

J/k <3

Re: Good stuff newerakb February 23 2007, 16:15:58 UTC

i wish you weren't kidding...i'd unpost it for a hundred bucks for sure!

Good stuff synergydance24 February 23 2007, 15:49:47 UTC

Two very enthusiastic thumbs up.

atomicyak February 24 2007, 10:37:37 UTC

I really liked the style.

newerakb February 25 2007, 03:11:12 UTC

domo arigato mr. pool