Comments | newford: spaniel, part deux.

kat9y in newford

spaniel, part deux.

Oct 09, 2006 01:47

Alright, so, the fic's actually gonna be done in three parts, 'stead of five. Which is fine. I think three's a good number. Feedback would be super-ace. ;)

title: Spaniel, part II (the waltz)
author: kat9y
rating: This bit: PG-13, next bit: NC-17.
movie/pairing: The Sting, Henry/Hooker, slight Henry/Billie.
summary: The boys've gotta get that rent ( Read more... )

Comments 10

princesskariboo October 9 2006, 17:11:53 UTC

Bwa ha ha! So much love! SO MUCH! <#### I can't wait for the conclusion. ^____________^

Great con, good dialogue (as always) with wonderful dialect writing (as always). I love the format, split between the development of the con and the actual playing out of the con - very much like the movie, and all other con movies, for that matter. I'm always impressed with you, honestly. That's why I'm your loyal #1 fan.

KEEP WORKING OR I'LL BREAK OUT MY CANON! Haven't used it much since you tapered off writing Fifi, but that doesn't mean it's any less SCARY!!! Rawr.

kat9y October 9 2006, 17:32:01 UTC

Thanks, man!

Yeah, I was thinking about the con and I was like; "Yeah, having 'em explain it, and then do it would be terribly uninteresting..."

My favorite bit was the one with Hooker and the cigar. :X

And yeah, never you worry, I'm stoked to write the conclusion. :D

princesskariboo October 9 2006, 18:05:17 UTC

w00 to the 00t!

I liked the Hooker and the cigar too. I think I may have turned to my mirror and informed myself that it was, indeed, hot.

tinted_glass October 11 2006, 03:08:37 UTC

It's nice reading a story that has an actual plot. Most fics I read anymore are shallow as puddles. Any potential respect I could have built for the authors evaporates when so-and-so fucks so-and-so hard in the second paragraph after they share an inconclusive talk about the weather in the first. Most of the time fics are tossed together and irrelevant, and I hate that. Thank you for not making this irrelevant. These two guys, they really do need fic that has substance. There's the legacy of the film to follow, and the very nature of the subject matter demands intricacy. You gave them that in the form of a con. For that I love you. Post the rest when you get the chance. :D

On a slightly (okay, not so slightly) off-topic note, I watched Jurassic Park last night. They made it off the island again. *smiles*

nova_mist November 20 2006, 18:35:05 UTC

This is wonderful! I love Sting-fic, and it's nice to finally see one out there other than my own poor lonely baby "Too Long In The Rain" *pimpsownfic* ;) lol - self-pimping aside, I really, really love this story! The comparison between Johnny and a golden spaniel has me squeeing like mad! The characterizations, the dialogue and, of course, this novel invention of yours known as a "plot" ( -_^ ) makes for a wonderful, compelling read! Can't wait for the next part! Please, don't keep me in agony - post sooooooon! Pretty please? ;)

legethien December 30 2006, 13:40:36 UTC

Oh man.... this is so good!
This image slaughtered me :
Hooker turned sharply, fingers forming a gun and snapping right on Henry.

“The rube act!” Hooker interrupted, the gun flattening as he slapped his palm on the table.
It's just such a great detail.

You must most the next part! ♥

giglet April 23 2007, 01:10:13 UTC

Hey, did you write the rest of this? Where?

now i feel real guilty... kat9y April 23 2007, 02:17:23 UTC

I actually haven't written the rest... which is really, REALLY eating at me. :(

I've got it started, though, and plan to finish it as soon as finals die down!

Re: now i feel real guilty... giglet April 23 2007, 15:21:11 UTC

I've got it started, though,

Yay!

Consider me to be your cheerleader, complete with pompoms:
Go! kat9y, Go! (followed by wild cheering and jumping up and down)

Also, best of luck on your finals!