Iridescence PART 1

[where_wordsfail]

and the first fic is up! bwahahaha (OP if there are formatting issues let me know)

posting will occur once every two days; anon commenting is on

Title: Iridescence
Pairing: Ryo/Shige
Rating: PG-13
Summary: It’s a strange reality to wake up to, having close to no memories of your past, and the person who is supposed to help you recover starts to feature

Comments

Comment for Part I

[anonymous]

I originally commented without being anon, but then realized that it might give the author away (since he or she would more than likely not comment on her own story) so I deleted that and I'm re-commenting to keep the mystery of the OP.

If binmusic or where_wordsfail decide that it's okay, then I'll comment with my username in the future.

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OP-san,

Let me just say this was a lovely concept and I would have never approached something like this because it's difficult to keep up the pace. The way the story breaks for another scene is exactly how I would assume Ryo's memories to be. Fragmented, but still making coherent sense when standing alone. The reader gets a feel for what Ryo is going through and we're trying to piece his life together alongside him. I'm enjoying this~ :]

I'm very curious to know more, especially from Shige's perspective since I'm sure it's more painful to watch someone you once know (and more than likely loved) totally not remember you. It's heartbreaking really.

Moving along to part II :]