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Fifteen Minutes Under a Painted Sky. Part 2

Oct 02, 2009 17:46

( Part 2 )

Comments 12

speckled_writer October 2 2009, 10:45:36 UTC

This was lovely. The whole tone of the fic was just perfect for Massu and I adore Massu's sister.

♥

vinyaromeniel October 2 2009, 13:31:39 UTC

I totally know who wrote this *singsongs* okay I'm 90% sure

BUT even though I am hopelessly biased I have only one thing to say:
awwwwwwwww &hearts &hearts &hearts

luna_silverwolf October 2 2009, 20:51:42 UTC

this was so utterly beautiful! i love how you wrote massu and pi. not many can. please tell me you will write more!

sanjihan October 3 2009, 05:05:54 UTC

...wonderful. I really enjoyed this. I love that you were able to really get into Massu without losing his sense of character (which is hard since we really know so little about him) and the buildup is great. Just. Thank you. :D

iolekei October 3 2009, 22:37:14 UTC

MassuPi~ Thank you for this :)
From the first part where Yamapi visits them backstage where: Yamashita’s gaze flicked down to Masuda’s lips, and then he quickly pulled away. --for some reason this part stayed with me the most <3
And that there's a bit of Massu x Tegoshi (albeit one-sided) in here, is also all sorts of bittersweet-- and nicely resolved as well.

Thanks again!