obsessed with haikusof_color_brightApril 6 2005, 17:45:34 UTC
I hate the ones that end with an adjective or preposition or generally an incomplete thought . . . but I love the ones that have a completeness about them. :D And I love how the randomized haikus absorb the flavor of whatever LJ they are pulling from. <3
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at camp she smiled often went around with a spirit of kindness
world around you right here on the tin roof of an old collapsed barn
while he played guitar i laid on my bed and read the intro to echoes
he said i'm going to react. is that what it's like to be dissatisfied?
had i liked that we could run through the woods sing and dance through the woods
him. someone who would appreciate trance music and my shoelaces and me
because there has to be strange or else the meanings are way too abstract
Oh, and I remember reading in your LJ about someone named Sam visiting, but I'd assumed he was just a friend, so I was surprised to read that you kissed him! ;]
Ooooh, I like the first, second, third and sixth haikus that you posted. I'm developing a likeing for haiku. Yeah...me and Sam were sort-of-kind-of-never-really-but-definitly together for a while there :)
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at camp she smiled
often went around with a
spirit of kindness
world around you right
here on the tin roof of an
old collapsed barn
while he played guitar
i laid on my bed and read
the intro to echoes
he said i'm going to
react. is that what it's like to
be dissatisfied?
had i liked that
we could run through the woods sing
and dance through the woods
him. someone who would
appreciate trance music and
my shoelaces and me
because there has to
be strange or else the meanings
are way too abstract
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