Fan Fiction - Ha ga itai

[ngoilan]

Title: Ha ga itiai
Characters: SMAP
Rating: G
Disclaimer: These characters do not belong to me
SMAP members react when Shingo has a toothache

Comments

[celestialraine]

waaa waa waa back in the web and this is what I see!!!! ♥♥♥♥ Your ShinGoro!!! omgomgomgomgomgomg I dies squeeing ShinGoro over their cuteness!!!! I imagined that would be more or less how Goro would react to Shingo (and Shingo will exactly be doing the same thing to Goro) but I got irritated when Takuya poked his head into the picture, moment breaker!!! wahahahahahaha the ShinTsuyo moments are precious, with Tsu just watching over his "patient" awwwwww... ;) too bad Leader only had a brief appearance, but I enjoyed this a lot!!!!

[ngoilan]

Thanks so much for your always sweet comments. You really understand what I'm trying to say and that means a lot! I had intended first for this piece to be about ShinTsuyo (I have one started that I'm not very happy with about Satasma combi) but all the other members floated in and, of course Goro chan stole his scene away from everyone else. I know you might have been loving ShinGoro but I had to have my TakuGoro moment, too, you know? (And I also managed to sneak the black rabbit in!).

Thanks again for being such a good friend!

[tsuristyle]

Totally cute! :D I love all the members' ways of looking after Shingo (lol at Goro fussing over him with herbal remedies XD), and Tsuyoshi just sitting there watching over him was really subtle and sweet :)
Also, I really like your dialogue, it's very natural-sounding!

[ngoilan]

Thanks so much for your very sweet comment. I am amazed that you found my page! I had intended this piece to be about ShinTsuyo but all the members ended up butting in - ha! But, yes, I do think Goro chan steals the scene he's in just by being Goro chan.

Thanks again so much. You've really made my day (well, that and watching SMAP fill TBS studios with Joy)!!!