The Perks of Christmas Shopping by sera_rocks - Adult rated

[sera_rocks]

Title: The Perks of Christmas Shopping

Author: sera_rocks

Pairing/Character(s): Nathan and Haley

Rating: Adult rated

Disclaimer: Sadly, I don’t own a thing. Darn.

Word Count: 1,979

Spoilers/Warnings: This is set after James is born, but there are no spoilers I’m aware of.

Summary: Nathan realizes how rewarding shopping can really be.

Author’s Notes: I

Comments

[bluelilyrose]

Firstly, welcome to the community and thanks for taking part in this challenge. :)

I absolutely loved this! Nathan was so in character with him inwardly complaining about traipsing into shop after shop for Christmas gifts and having to carry all of the bags. I could easily picture that happening. *lol*

If you hadn't said this was your first time writing smut, I would never have guessed. It was hot as hell and you did an awesome job with it. :D

Oh, and I loved the adorable little scene where Nathan checks on a sleeping Jamie. Aww! ♥

I really hope this will be the first of many challenges you'll be taking part in.

[sera_rocks]

Gaaah! You have me smiling from ear to ear with your response. Thank you so much, and I look forward to participating in new challenges.

[dawnieangel]

This was so cute! I loved that despite all his complaining Nathan let Haley drag him around the shops all day - and of course Haley knew how to make it up to her man! And Jamie-cutness is never frowned upon! I hope you enter the next challenge because I've enjoyed what you've came up for for this one.

[sera_rocks]

Oh, I definitely will. Even a complaining Nathan is always hot. lol.

[burstoflight]

Wow, this was awesome! I can't believe it's your first piece of smut. It was definitely, definitely hot! Great job!!!

[sera_rocks]

Yep, it really is my first piece of smut, and I'm so glad you guys enjoyed it. It just makes me look forward to writing more.

[lorilozz]

You did a really great job with fic, especially if it's your first smut piece. I really enjoyed how you wrote Nathan while they were shopping, it was definitely how I'd expect him to be.

[sera_rocks]

*blushes* Thank you! I was pretty nervous about it at first, and I rewrote the love scene about a dozen times until I thought it was good enough.

[sadaffair]

I loved this! I can just see Nathan feeling tortured by having to go shopping and Haley dragging him from store to store. LOL But I am sure he liked his reward. LOL! I love the idea of the mistletoe, hot yet cute! No wonder Nathan loved Haley's outfit. I can just imagine what it looked like! I hope you write more, I loved it!

[sera_rocks]

Awww. Thanks so much! *hugs!* And don't worry, I plan on participating in every challenge from now on. :)