White Pleasures - Adult Rated

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Title: White Pleasures
Author: Caro
Challenge: I’m Hungry For You
Pairing: Nathan and Haley
Rated: Adult
Word Count: 5877 words
Disclaimer: I only own NH in my dreams. Sigh.
Spoilers: A few months after s4.
Summary: Nathan is getting frustrated with the lack of lovin'.
AN: Thank you to Vivi who has pushed me and helped me read this over time and

Comments

[atmysoul]

Eeeeeeeee! Oh my gosh! Whipped cream underwear?! And ass grabbage and doggy style and ... I think my mind just melted. So hot. Mmmm.

[lorilozz]

That is some mighty hot lovin' you've written there! I love your mix of hot and sexy combined with humour. A playful Naley is always a pleasure to read. And believe me... this was definitely a pleasure. Pun intended. *lol*

I really really loved how desperate Nathan was to be with his wife and especially the first part where they got interrupted. I must be evil because I can't help but chuckle at the thought of poor Nathan having to put some ice on it.

[bluelilyrose]

Wow!!! That was amazing, Caroline, and so damn hot that I think I need to turn my fan on to try and cool down. Hee!

I love this so much and you've done a fantastic job with it! The whipped cream underwear was just so inspired and very original; an extremely good use of the challenge's food theme, I must say.

The flirty, teasing banter was so Nathan and Haley and I love that you included the tattoo which we so need to see again on the show *sigh*.

Thanks so much for taking part in the challenge! *hugs* I hope this will be the first of many challenges you'll be participating in. *hint hint*

Btw, any chance I can bribe you into writing a prequel to this covering the scene where Haley tried to teach Nathan how to bake a cake? You can't dangle hot counter sex in front of us and not deliver. *lol*

[poupa]

Awesome fic, Caro. It's so naughty, hot and so cute. Great job, hun!

[jllover05]

That was hot! I loved how much Nathan wanted Haley. The whipped cream was a great use of the food theme! I can't wait to read more of your fics :)

I loved that you refrenced the 23 tattoo! They need to bring it back on the show :D