The Third Time is the Charm

[pinky_supergirl]

Title:  The Third Time is The Charm
Author:  Bec
Pairing:  Nathan and Haley Scott
Rating:  Mature Adult
Word Count: 5725
Spoilers/Warnings: None past season 4
Disclaimer: I own none of one tree hill, which is obvious, coz if i did there'd be much more nudity in the show!

This was written as my entry to the 'You want me to wear what?' costume challenge on

Comments

WOW

[catc20]

Gah, this was sooo amazing hun. You did something Mark never did, made the accident actually worth it. LOL

Very hot and just very brilliant. Their love just glows in this. And we so haven't talked in forever. We have to catch up. I'm adding you as I frien!

Love ya,

Cath

Re: WOW

[pinky_supergirl]

Hehe, I added you back. Thanks Cath, it means a lot to me that someone as brilliant a writer as you likes my fics. IM me soon, or i'll just send you an email to say hi. xxoo *hugs* Becca

[firefly_twlight]

"“Hales” It came out a husky whisper against her lips, her breath was coming a little faster as he nuzzled her nose softly with his own. “It’s not about you being sexy… it’s about you being mine.”"
Hun, I can't even begin to tell you how HOT that line is. So sexy, so sweet...so Nathan.

And this was awesome. Let's be frank, NH were robbed of a wedding night/honeymoon that day (STUPID RACH-HO!) and Nathan's Nemoness the following days ruined the mood too, so this was definitely long overdue.
I followed the characterizations and I flove the way you always portray their hunger/affection for each other.
Amazing.

And Haley's last line was perfection.

[firefly_twlight]

Yeah...followed should be adored. Haha.

Love ya,
Court!

[pinky_supergirl]

Oh yeah, I got that, :P Thanks Court, I'm glad you liked it... that line seems to be pretty popular; Lori loves it too! *hugs* So where's your smutty entry for this challenge? We all know you can write brilliantly, so how about joining in the challenge, hmm? xxoo *hugs* Becca

[firefly_twlight]

Haha. I'm SORRY!
Seriously life and school are kinda taking everything outta me right now, and then this hiatus/stupid spoilers are definitely sucking the inspiration right outta me. *pout*
I'm horrible, I know.

A few people have requested NHJ stuff, and I really, really want to get it done, but Idk...I just hate everything I write right now. Season 4 was just uninspirational and so are spoilers/tweenies/rants!
Le sigh.

[sadaffair]

GUH! The idea behind this is fantastic! I would never have come up with an idea like this for this challenge and I was pleasantly surprised because it was so different and fun, and hey, not to mention hot. I too am frustrated that we never got a honeymoon with these two and it's something I always wanted to read about it in fics.

I also love the how in love these two are after such a long time and it's the way I imagine it will be. Lovely!

Great work and I hope you take part in all the challenges after this one.;)

[pinky_supergirl]

Thanks sadaffair for the review! I'm really glad you liked it. Sorry, i don't know your name... I'm Bec, hi *waves*. Yeah, it's pretty easy to get caught up in the romance of a couple like Naley, even a few years into their marriage. I picture them as being similar to Lydia/Jimmy (except hopefully without abandoning their youngest child) when they get older... keeping the fun and spark in their relationship, no matter how old they are. It'd be refreshing to see.
Hopefully we'll see you put up an entry for the next challenge... I'm pretty sure you write, don't you? I'd love to read some of your stuff.

[thedreamygirl]

This was gorgeous! The start with Haley looking through the old photos was so sweet as was them being all cute and giggly when arriving at the hotel - and the smut was just awesome! I think my favourite bit is when Nathan told Haley to put on the wedding dress and being all possessive *sigh*