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That the Moon Elbowed the Stars 2/17

Sep 03, 2011 18:52

Title: That the Moon Elbowed the Stars
Chapter: 2/17
Rating: R
Pairing: Puck/Rachel
Word Count: 5,620
Summary: And maybe it's an awful thing to think, but he wonders what's worse for her, losing New York or losing her dad.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

( Just...can you please pretend that you believe that I'm fine? )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, that the moon elbowed the stars, fanfic: puck/rachel

Comments 11

shadowkitty22 September 4 2011, 02:08:49 UTC

So with the exception of the eye color you totally just described my husband's car right down to the spot on the nose. When he was a kitten we thought that he had a spaghetti stain sauce on his nose but it turned out that it was just his fur growing in that way. And it amuses me that their kitten shares the same last name as Finn now.

nicalyse September 7 2011, 20:45:54 UTC

Adorable! I have a pair of white cats, one of whom had a little smudge of orange when he was a kitten that went away when he grew up. I used to think that I'd managed to get foundation on his fur (never mind that I wear powder, not liquid).

I thought about that! I decided it was more amusing than anything else and let it go through. ;)

vanilladaze September 4 2011, 09:49:50 UTC

I adore the Puck/Santana/Rachel friendship in this so, so much! And, god, I love Andrew's slight snark. The whole kitten naming scene was hysterical, and you can always count on Puck not giving a damn about being P.C., lol. I'm excited to see Rachel's time at OSU, even if I still feel a bit broken-hearted that she has to let go of New York, and I can't wait to read all the shenanigans I'm sure Puck and Santana will drag her in to. Also, bring on the angst-- I love it like a fat kid loves candy. Another fabulous chapter, as always =)

nicalyse September 7 2011, 20:47:47 UTC

Ahaha, don't worry, there's angst to come! Along with some lighter bits. (I like some balance.) I'm so glad that you liked this chapter!

smc_27 September 4 2011, 15:32:12 UTC

I will always love that Puck named the cat.

Marlene being so insistent on making sure Rachel is okay is just lovely, and Puck and Santana trying to get her to have a good time even though they both know her life sucks right now is perfect.

I still love the idea of Rachel's apartment being the holding place for her friends' booze.

nicalyse September 7 2011, 20:48:59 UTC

I think it's fantastic that Puck knows who Rock Hudson is. :P

Thanks for commenting, love!

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nicalyse September 7 2011, 20:49:55 UTC

Thank you so much!

sneaker328 September 6 2011, 10:38:25 UTC

Santana and Puck are going to be such terrible (wonderful) influences on Rachel. The cat stuff was absolutely adorable. Poor Rachel -- her dads finally get a pet once she's already out of the house.

(Apropos of nothing, props for writing the plural "Berrys" like that instead of throwing in an unnecessary apostrophe like so many writers seem to do with last names.)

nicalyse September 7 2011, 20:51:37 UTC

Don't parents always get the things you want as soon as you move out? Just...isn't that the way it goes? :P

(I think a lot of people just can't ignore the you spelled that wrong!!!! red squiggle. No, Berrys isn't a word. But Berry isn't a word, it's a name. Also, some people just don't know their apostrophe rules at all.:P I appreciate your appreciation!)