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spuffy_seeker November 11 2005, 16:47:54 UTC
wow. wow. wow.

truly amazing story. it was painful and beautiful and one of the best sarkney angst fics i have ever read.

-If Sydney falls and it isn’t at Sark’s hands, does she make a sound?-
and that line sums up the wonderfully twisted connection that they have. i feel that if they aren't meant to create together than they must destroy each other and you did a wonderful job of combining both.

-and he said the first thing that sprung to his mind,
“My submersible only seats four.”
“And your bed?”-
what a great line, just a bright spot in the story and great snark to boot.

thank you so much for sharing this...Good Sarkney is hard to find, not to mention brilliant fic like this. i am going to pimp this to any and evrey one. even non-sarkney
:( readers should check this out, simply because it is so well written. i hope there is more writing to come.

-sara

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nicblue0707 November 13 2005, 14:57:23 UTC
Thank you so much for your nice comments. I should admit that the first line you mentioned has been on my hard drive for ages, and was taken from some long-abandoned Sarkney fic, but I loved the line and am glad it finally found a home. I completely agree with your analysis of Sarkney - creation vs destruction - which is why they are *so* Jack and Irina v2.0.

I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. I don't know what other writings may come after this - I'm pretty tapped out at the moment - but feel free to check my archives for some of my other Sarkney fic.

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anonymous November 12 2005, 02:50:58 UTC
This was simply, absolutely gorgeous. What a treat.

You just set the mood so well. Hauntingly beautiful throughout.

He started slowly, “The illusion of a guest is better than none at all.”
“I’m real enough,” she replied with a small smile

I love how that comes back later, with him being a guest in her home and him realizing she knows. That is just a great section.

I'm doing a shamefully bad job of commenting, suffice it to say I just loved it. Thanks for posting!

Jen

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nicblue0707 November 13 2005, 14:59:33 UTC
Glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for your kind words. And to be honest, I hadn't ever really thought of the connection between those two sections with regard to Sark's presence in her house as being the illusion of a guest. I *love* that idea! Thank you so, so much for pointing it out to me!

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staraice November 12 2005, 11:44:38 UTC
I keep thinking about this. And I keep wanting to give some kind of feedback that reflects how I feel. All I can say in the end is that there are some stories that stay with you just through the sheer elegance of their language. Your work is very emotive and it's going to be bouncing around in my head for some time to come.

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nicblue0707 November 13 2005, 15:00:36 UTC
Wow. Thank you so very much for such a lovely comment. That is such a compliment. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story.

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a_proclivity November 12 2005, 23:37:40 UTC
You write so beautifully! I cannot wait to read more of your writing, please write again soon.

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nicblue0707 November 13 2005, 15:01:41 UTC
Thank you very much. I don't know how much more I'll be writing in the near future, as I'm pretty exhausted from this endeavor, but feel free to check out my memories for other fic that I've written.

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clannadlvr November 17 2005, 07:28:52 UTC
Oh, nic...

I'm in tears right now...I just can't even formulate a proper response at the moment. This was just lovely and heart breaking all at once.

I'll have to comment when I'm more coherant and not just awash with emotion. Really, absolutely breathtaking.

(BTW, do you still have the songs from your soundtrack? Would you mind reloading them? Let me know. I'd love to read this with the songs as background.)

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nicblue0707 November 17 2005, 16:06:23 UTC
I'm at my folks' right now, but when I get home, I'd be happy to re-upload the songs for you. I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you so very much. I'll try to zip them for you, but I may forget that part and just re-upload all of them if that's okay. Thanks again. :)

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