[OS] Shine Like Stars Do [Ohmiya]

Aug 12, 2012 22:34

Title: Shine Like Stars Do
Pairing: Ohmiya
Rating: R
Genre: AU, angst, romance
Warning: Mention of violence, abuse, murder
Words: 3,094
Summary: I asked a question to this sky that I can't see any stars in, because I want to see the continuation of the promise from that day.
A/N: A fic inspired by Arashi's morning light. So many thanks to the most ( Read more... )

fandom: arashi, pairing: ohno/nino, type: oneshot, chara: ohno satoshi, chara: ninomiya kazunari

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platinum28 August 13 2012, 13:40:54 UTC
The sense of time being thrown around creates a delicate sort of feel, I'm confused but at the same time I'm not. I love how you finished on a comma too without the sentence being complete, it's really effective. :")

Thanks for sharing!

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morninglights August 15 2012, 10:51:36 UTC
So someone actually noticed the comma at the end! I'm really happy that it had an effect on you :)

Thank you for your comment ♥

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morninglights August 19 2012, 07:15:27 UTC
Thank you dear ♥

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walking_orgy August 22 2012, 21:25:57 UTC
; ______________ ;

Oh mann... was machst du nur mit mir?? Ich weiss nicht, ob ich jetzt (*_______*) oder (T________T) oder (. ______ .) sein soll... ich glaub, ich bin ALLES auf einmal XD;
Hach, ich freu mich so, dass du was neues geschrieben hast ♥♥♥
(Trotz der 'dunklen' Thematik, aber irgendwie fällt mir grad auf, dass das bei dir eh meist der Fall ist - DC ist ja auch nicht gerade leichte Kost XD [UND ICH WERD DC IM URLAUB FERTIG LESEN!! YES YES, ICH NEHM EXTRA MEINEN LAPTOP MIT ♥♥♥])

Haaaach. Zum Glück ist meine Laune gerade relativ sappy... deshalb bedeutet das Ende für mich auch einen positiven Ausgang :3.♥♥

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morninglights August 23 2012, 11:35:05 UTC
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~~♥♥♥ Komm her du *hugs*

Eigentlich ist die fic ja schon nen ganzes Jahr alt *lach* Aber irgendwie hab ich es nie übersetzen lassen. Und stimmt, irgendwie hab ichs mit Angst und Drama und all dem. Mach ich gar nicht absichtig, dass kommt immer einfach so ;__;

Ich persönlich find das Ende ja auch eher positiv, aber ich glaub das kann man ganz verschieden sehen XD Bin auf jedenfall froh dass du sappy genug drauf warst X3.

LOVE YOU~~~<3<3<3<3<3

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kiriezero September 5 2012, 22:28:41 UTC
it's so sad but so beautiful at he same time T-T it broke my heart!
and your writting style is so good! it really made everything angstier and more painful...
I want to believe that they had a happy ending, I don't know how Nino found him, it's kind of impossible, but Ohno deserves a happy ending after everything he had gone through T.T
thanks for sharing this wonderful fic ^---^

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morninglights September 7 2012, 07:31:07 UTC
Thank you! I'm really happy to hear that you like my writing style :)
If you want to believe in a happy ending for Ohmiya, then it is one. Because when they belong together, they will always find their way in the end ♥

Thank you for commenting :)

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himitsu_17 September 25 2012, 19:29:01 UTC
It's breathtaking!!
I don't know what to say but it's beautiful!
With that light in the end, wahoo!
Thanks for writing and sharing.

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morninglights September 26 2012, 07:18:08 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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