This may seem strange to comment on in regards to a random lj entry, but i've started to openly notice the fact that your writing is improving in a dramatic fashion. Each sentence, even when the content is summer boredom, has a unique character and vitality, and yet they all still work together. It reads like planned chaos, and keeps me churning through words. GCSU is apparently an institution you can feel good about pumping money into.
that same sink-gut, anxiously blue feeling happens to me when i drink too heavily. it's always the morning after. it's a strange thing, isn't it? we both spent years drinking our bodies into the ground with little consequence harsher than embarrassment and black outs. why now? i wonder this often.
good luck with your story, will. i am very proud of you. i say that without condescension.
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Send me some drafts, i have nothing to do.
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That's my basic response to all forms of responsibility.
PS - if you are capable, find a way to listen to "Silver Jews - San Francisco, BC" right now.
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good luck with your story, will. i am very proud of you. i say that without condescension.
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