I started reading the story right after the second chapter was posted. I had so much fun and I was thrilled when you updated it. Got me a bit worried when the fourth took some time to show up, but this evening you made me a happy girl :) You're a master, and you've done such a good (now that's an understatement - it's more than great actualy) work. I admire your style, and your way with words. I love the plot, and the way your characters are. You got them really good - what they are all about. I understand what you said about this chapter being late, but please don't let us wait that long for the next one. I'm adicted, and I can't wait to see what will happen. And this is being said by someone that doesn't like all that s&m, dom/sub thing. You have some mean mojo going on here, you got me under your spell. Okay, so I'll just stop ranting now. Anyway, the point of this babble is to say how much I admire you as a writer. You're great, and this is great work.
I think one of the best things I can hear is that the story appeals to more than just those who are normally happy about the kink, so thanks very much for the comments - you have made me very happy indeed! ^^
If it's any help, I'm normally about 2-3 chapters ahead of myself when writing the larger pieces of work, so hopefully the delays between posting shouldn't be as long as it has been. Along with the real life building work in the house and other stuff, I was having massive trouble getting Nick's prowl into the event to flow well - for some reason it always felt a bit awkward, although I guess that might be simply due to it having a large section on observation rather than plot as such - so the editing process just kept going on and on. The next few chapters have more of a definite plot going through them, so they should hopefully get themselves polished much earlier..!
Looks like Blake is taking an interest in Nick (should I be worried) - yes. Yes you should. *wahahahaha!*
*cough* Im sorry about that, I think I just had an evilgasm... anyway! I'm very glad to hear it came across well, I was having a devil of a time with Nick approaching the party, and my usual betas aren't into the fandom so I can't really poke them for an opinion ;).
Thankfully our mouse problem is .. um, well possibly delayed, the mice themselves were out of the house at the time, so they might return in summer. Ah well, I really quite like mice - my immediate reaction had been 'awww!' - but not underneath the shower.. :D
Nice cliffie...! Nick is totally out of his depth and by now everyone knows it. He's gonna get his ass handed to him and I am SO looking forward to it. Catherine's going to be having kittens in the back room before this is over. Also hoping for something nice and kinky for greg. Can't wait!
*grin* Needless to say, you're so right ;). There's so much fun to be had!
Ah, so you're a Greg fan, eh? He's definitely scheduled to be up for some awkward situations of his own, although I'll make sure there's some extra juicy bits in there for you ^^
Yep, sure am. Warrick, greg and brass are my favorite characters, not in any particular order. I'm still getting used to the idea of slashing them, and I'm sure you'll soon be over-riding any remaining trepidation quite spectacularly.
Oh, perfect! Greg and Warrick were already destined for some slash of their own, although I have to confess I wasn't going to have Brass for anything other than his usual sarcastic/efficient style - now you got me thinking! *rubs chin*
I'm confident you'll get over the weirdness very soon ;) - I had the same myself, and then I started watching the shows after reading the slash and oh, so many ideas started bubbling up.. although, to be honest, that sounds a little messy.. O.o
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Sorry for the delays on things, Real life got the better of me! *shakes fist*
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You're a master, and you've done such a good (now that's an understatement - it's more than great actualy) work. I admire your style, and your way with words. I love the plot, and the way your characters are. You got them really good - what they are all about.
I understand what you said about this chapter being late, but please don't let us wait that long for the next one. I'm adicted, and I can't wait to see what will happen. And this is being said by someone that doesn't like all that s&m, dom/sub thing. You have some mean mojo going on here, you got me under your spell.
Okay, so I'll just stop ranting now. Anyway, the point of this babble is to say how much I admire you as a writer. You're great, and this is great work.
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If it's any help, I'm normally about 2-3 chapters ahead of myself when writing the larger pieces of work, so hopefully the delays between posting shouldn't be as long as it has been. Along with the real life building work in the house and other stuff, I was having massive trouble getting Nick's prowl into the event to flow well - for some reason it always felt a bit awkward, although I guess that might be simply due to it having a large section on observation rather than plot as such - so the editing process just kept going on and on. The next few chapters have more of a definite plot going through them, so they should hopefully get themselves polished much earlier..!
once again, thanks very much! ^^
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Oh Grissom let Blake touch Nick, wow, I have to say he has the master down to a tee.
Looks like Blake is taking an interest in Nick (should I be worried)
again wonderful chapter. Gil really does make a great master, loved his comment about why and when he would punished.
P.S I hope that who ever was ill, is better now and that you did get rid of you mouse problem??? Did the scene get out of the dog house yet???
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*cough* Im sorry about that, I think I just had an evilgasm... anyway! I'm very glad to hear it came across well, I was having a devil of a time with Nick approaching the party, and my usual betas aren't into the fandom so I can't really poke them for an opinion ;).
Thankfully our mouse problem is .. um, well possibly delayed, the mice themselves were out of the house at the time, so they might return in summer. Ah well, I really quite like mice - my immediate reaction had been 'awww!' - but not underneath the shower.. :D
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Ah, so you're a Greg fan, eh? He's definitely scheduled to be up for some awkward situations of his own, although I'll make sure there's some extra juicy bits in there for you ^^
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I'm confident you'll get over the weirdness very soon ;) - I had the same myself, and then I started watching the shows after reading the slash and oh, so many ideas started bubbling up.. although, to be honest, that sounds a little messy.. O.o
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