I like it so much! Poor, poor Nick. And where is he by the way, should we be scared for his safety? I know you won't tell us now, but I just had to ask that :) I just read this post, and already can't wait for the next one. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Griss sure enjoyed himself there, and Greg almost panicking when touched - now that was more than just him being eager to try everything there is - he's got more than he hoped for. I got the feeling that while for Nick the whole thing is just a tiresome, hard day at work (and unpleasant too, though he must have been at least a bit curious), Greg thought of it as some kind of crazy party. Man, he was wrong :) I know, I promissed I won't babble anymore, but I just can't help myself. I enjoy your story so much, and it's done so good it makes me think about so many things. Ugh, that didn't sound well, but I hope that you understood what I meant.....
So much I can't say! *wails* But don't worry, everything will be *fine*... um, at some point. Honest! And now I have the feeling I should be shuffling my feet in an awkward manner
You're definitely right about poor Greg - he's living in a little tv fantasy, and now he's actually up close and personal he's a little less cocky and a little more focused on what actually happens outside of the act. Poor boy's going to have an 'interesting time' finding his feet again :D
Heh heh! I understand what you mean ^^ - well, I hope, otherwise you're in for an interesting day yourself! I'm so glad it's working well enough for that type of effect to occur though, half the time I'm a bit worried it's going to be a little flat or a little too focused on the events and not the characterisation.
Mind you, there's going to be a few interesting chapters coming up... just wait until the blindfolds get involved! :D... ooh, there's that evilgasm again...
Yeah, I knew you wouldn't say anything *sighs* Oh well... It's working more than well. Your characters are by far the best of all the ff I've read so far (well, there is one other great author who nocked me down, but only one). That is one of the things I like so much in here, and the story itself is very interesting. And intense, if I may add. Blindfolds... Oh my. Now I really feel sorry for Greg ;)
REALLY heated now. Grissom's remark about 'hands off the shorts' had me rofl-ing. And believe me, I was drooling like crazy over greg. He's being so subby here, and I like it! I have to wonder about catherine's state of nail-biting in the back room. And, er, you dressed warrick in the speculation-worthy underwear. What I wanna know is how long it will contain him.
Now what has happened to darling nicky? he's put grissom in an uncomfortable space, with mr. Black and all his comments. Something tells me he (nick) isn't keeping company in the lobby with a magazine. Fist up his ass, perhaps?
Fist up the ass already? Down, girl! ;) Although now you've put an image in my head, and it's remarkably hard to shift... (the first time I wrote that last sentence, I missed out the f in the last word and turned it into a quite worrying concept..!)
I suspect Greg's going to be wonderfully submissive in his usual cheeky manner for several chapters to come, so there's a whole playground of fun to play with - and Warrick *has* been remarkably restraint so far, bless him. Not sure how long that's gonna last for, I have to confess.
As for Catherine, I'm actually writing her scene at the moment - there's a lot of shouting and scowling. And a few finger jabs, although that again sounds more disturbing than it probably ought to... *needs cold shower*
I had forgotten how much fun it is to do bondage club writing ^^ - bring on the lubricant!
Take my comments with a grain of salt. This fic is making me a bit excitable and I tend to throw thoughts at random at such moments. And writers who get the jump on my pre-conceptions are always appreciated.
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Can't wait to see what will happen next. Griss sure enjoyed himself there, and Greg almost panicking when touched - now that was more than just him being eager to try everything there is - he's got more than he hoped for. I got the feeling that while for Nick the whole thing is just a tiresome, hard day at work (and unpleasant too, though he must have been at least a bit curious), Greg thought of it as some kind of crazy party. Man, he was wrong :)
I know, I promissed I won't babble anymore, but I just can't help myself. I enjoy your story so much, and it's done so good it makes me think about so many things. Ugh, that didn't sound well, but I hope that you understood what I meant.....
I'll shut up now, I promise :D
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You're definitely right about poor Greg - he's living in a little tv fantasy, and now he's actually up close and personal he's a little less cocky and a little more focused on what actually happens outside of the act. Poor boy's going to have an 'interesting time' finding his feet again :D
Heh heh! I understand what you mean ^^ - well, I hope, otherwise you're in for an interesting day yourself! I'm so glad it's working well enough for that type of effect to occur though, half the time I'm a bit worried it's going to be a little flat or a little too focused on the events and not the characterisation.
Mind you, there's going to be a few interesting chapters coming up... just wait until the blindfolds get involved! :D... ooh, there's that evilgasm again...
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It's working more than well. Your characters are by far the best of all the ff I've read so far (well, there is one other great author who nocked me down, but only one). That is one of the things I like so much in here, and the story itself is very interesting. And intense, if I may add.
Blindfolds... Oh my. Now I really feel sorry for Greg ;)
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Now what has happened to darling nicky? he's put grissom in an uncomfortable space, with mr. Black and all his comments. Something tells me he (nick) isn't keeping company in the lobby with a magazine. Fist up his ass, perhaps?
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I suspect Greg's going to be wonderfully submissive in his usual cheeky manner for several chapters to come, so there's a whole playground of fun to play with - and Warrick *has* been remarkably restraint so far, bless him. Not sure how long that's gonna last for, I have to confess.
As for Catherine, I'm actually writing her scene at the moment - there's a lot of shouting and scowling. And a few finger jabs, although that again sounds more disturbing than it probably ought to... *needs cold shower*
I had forgotten how much fun it is to do bondage club writing ^^ - bring on the lubricant!
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Take my comments with a grain of salt. This fic is making me a bit excitable and I tend to throw thoughts at random at such moments. And writers who get the jump on my pre-conceptions are always appreciated.
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