Heh, I finally got into a part that has a bit more physical activity ^^ - and you know what Nick's like, he has a habit of getting himself a little bit broken. I'm just hoping he'll get himself fixed soon enough :D
Warrick and Greg, wow that was just so great, glad to see they both gave into their desires, I have to say it was very hot.
I really feel for Nick, he knows what he wants, but yet he is still being defiant, poor guy seems so broken, I just wonder how he is going to feel when he realises what happen between Warrick and Greg. I love that he looks to Grissom for comfort, yet at the same time is mad. Gil has mixed feelings as well, wish the 2 of them would get on the same page.
Has Gil changed his mind, about not taking Nick to Blake???? after all he did say that they got what they came for and he wants to see where its going.
I have a feeling that Nick was talking about what happen when he was 9 when he told Grissom that he was touched before without wanted it.
Nick always feels like he has to cope on his own, hopefully that will change Hopefully Greg and warrick will have no regrets.
Heh, I was a little happy to get into some physical action, I have to confess - it's rare I get to this level of the fic and I haven't had a few full on scenes, but the characters just seemed to need a bit more time to get into it all (bless 'em!)
Nick might well be the confused one of the fic - the others tend to be in a better position to adapt, but Nick's still clashing against himself. Which might get a little messy, thinking about it... mind you, instead of a situation where there's just the two of them, he's going to have a whole team supporting him. That should at least help out a bit ^^ - I hope!
*whistles innocently about Blake*
Thanks very much for reading and commenting, it's greatly appreciated ^^
Having just sat and read parts 1-8 in one go, I have to say this is brilliant.
I'm really enjoying the build up to each of the pairings, and you've kept them all nicely in character. Greg's nervous proposition to Warrick was great and the whole Nick/Grissom situation is just cute.
Thanks very much! (and sorry I've only just got back to you, couldn't get my computer to play ball..!) *wails*
I suspect I'm going to be tampering with their characters in the next few chapters, but hopefully it won't be too bad - glad to hear it's been reasonably consistent to this point though ^^
sorry so late. i did read it the day you posted; had the flu that day and strange as it may sound, in my dehydrated state it infiltrated the senses powerfully... need i even say how panty-melting, get-out-the-mop worthy the warrick/greg part was? it literally made me dizzy.
nick and grisson are still dancing around each other a big. interesting on nick's part because it seems he can barely move. things could get even rougher if/when they meet up with blake again. had a good giggle over grisson asking nick if he intended for them to 'date'. you got that so ON.
Oh! Hope you're recovered from the flu and dizziness, that sounds yuk - although at least there's little periods of the day when slash can be read :D. And I'm glad you liked the Warrick/Greg bit, I had your comments in mind whilst writing a good portion of it.. *grin*
As for Nick and Gil - arggh, they're frustrating me, bless them, what with their little dance of denial. Ah well.. I'm almost finished editing the next chapter, so they can start frustrating everyone else soon :D
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Love the Greg/warrick part, sweet image.
Tahnsk a lot for this new part.
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Thanks for reading!
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Wonderful update,
Warrick and Greg, wow that was just so great, glad to see they both gave into their desires, I have to say it was very hot.
I really feel for Nick, he knows what he wants, but yet he is still being defiant, poor guy seems so broken, I just wonder how he is going to feel when he realises what happen between Warrick and Greg. I love that he looks to Grissom for comfort, yet at the same time is mad. Gil has mixed feelings as well, wish the 2 of them would get on the same page.
Has Gil changed his mind, about not taking Nick to Blake???? after all he did say that they got what they came for and he wants to see where its going.
I have a feeling that Nick was talking about what happen when he was 9 when he told Grissom that he was touched before without wanted it.
Nick always feels like he has to cope on his own, hopefully that will change
Hopefully Greg and warrick will have no regrets.
Again amazing story, hope to read more soon
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Nick might well be the confused one of the fic - the others tend to be in a better position to adapt, but Nick's still clashing against himself. Which might get a little messy, thinking about it... mind you, instead of a situation where there's just the two of them, he's going to have a whole team supporting him. That should at least help out a bit ^^ - I hope!
*whistles innocently about Blake*
Thanks very much for reading and commenting, it's greatly appreciated ^^
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I'm really enjoying the build up to each of the pairings, and you've kept them all nicely in character. Greg's nervous proposition to Warrick was great and the whole Nick/Grissom situation is just cute.
Now eagery awaiting the next installment.
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I suspect I'm going to be tampering with their characters in the next few chapters, but hopefully it won't be too bad - glad to hear it's been reasonably consistent to this point though ^^
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nick and grisson are still dancing around each other a big. interesting on nick's part because it seems he can barely move. things could get even rougher if/when they meet up with blake again. had a good giggle over grisson asking nick if he intended for them to 'date'. you got that so ON.
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As for Nick and Gil - arggh, they're frustrating me, bless them, what with their little dance of denial. Ah well.. I'm almost finished editing the next chapter, so they can start frustrating everyone else soon :D
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